Yuusha no Haha desu ga, Maou-gun no Kanbu ni Narimashita - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Justice for All

[MangaDex]

 

[SnowMexican1]

Okay, I'm really digging this. I'm hoping we get to see more of that Lamia executive.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

 

[Cyliasta]

Okay, I'm really digging this. I'm hoping we get to see more of that Lamia executive.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

With stockings, i hope

 

[SnowMexican1]

With stockings, i hope

Ah, another person of culture I see

 

[ciera]

Thank you for the chapter

 

[Su1phur]

I see your group is going to continue with scanlating, and I'm all for it. But please do spend a little bit more effort on typesetting, and proofreading if possible. I'm not going to comment on MTL as I also use it, but please proofread the translation.

 

[Jayswing103]

I wonder, is there going to be romance? And if so, will the ML be the elf or the demon king?

 

[Jamussor]

I really like how it's not that the Demon's are necessarily "good people" or "opposite" to humans, but "neutral" and trying to live their lives.

 

[Cyliasta]

I see your group is going to continue with scanlating, and I'm all for it. But please do spend a little bit more effort on typesetting, and proofreading if possible. I'm not going to comment on MTL as I also use it, but please proofread the translation.

Would you please point out what i should be making better?
For the Typesetting i am focusing on being easily readable.
As for Proofreading, i am doin the TL, passing throught a script and then when typesetting on the page, i am comparing all the bubbles on the page to make most sense of the text as so to naturally connect the conversation.
If you could please point out where it wasn't good, i would like to know so i can do better next chapter

 

[casual_reader1234]

I like this set up a lot. Logical and grounded. I expect that the son (hero) will ultimately turn against the ones training him when he finds out that they lied to him about his mother's death, and that the demons saved her. That's +1 for the demons for trust, -1 for the humans. I'm hoping he'll see the big picture and think for himself instead of the usual "the truth is right in front of me but I've been building up this hatred for 10 years now so I'm not gonna change my mind without doing something stupid first".

 

[Syanalassa]

Would you please point out what i should be making better?
For the Typesetting i am focusing on being easily readable.
As for Proofreading, i am doin the TL, passing throught a script and then when typesetting on the page, i am comparing all the bubbles on the page to make most sense of the text as so to naturally connect the conversation.
If you could please point out where it wasn't good, i would like to know so i can do better next chapter

I have a minor suggestion with text that goes directly on the background or has a speech bubble that doesnt have a white background (like the first bubble in the previous chapter) give the text a pixel or two of white outline as this will make it much easier to read
it other wise keep up the good work

 

[Yuyu_yusha]

I feel a logical fallacy with the goddess decision in descending a hero to human, but i just can't put it into words correctly.

Edited: let me try to point it. The goddess seems able to intervene with the world order directly by descending the hero. So, instead of understanding why the human suddenly exiling the demon race, she sent a weapon of demon genocide to human side? Why not sending a hero who can 'unite' both race?

 

[NotACatNinja]

I feel a logical fallacy with the goddess decision in descending a hero to human, but i just can't put it into words correctly.

Just call her a bitch that playing favorites.

 

[Yuyu_yusha]

Just call her a bitch that playing favorites.

Dude you just take away my words

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Dantrig]

Oh man, another usless goddess. Why did she think seperatin them was a good idea? If she could send a hero, she could have instructed the priests to seek coexistance.

 

[kirby_422]

Mom's gonna have her children do battle to the death

 

[Cyliasta]

I have a minor suggestion with text that goes directly on the background or has a speech bubble that doesnt have a white background (like the first bubble in the previous chapter) give the text a pixel or two of white outline as this will make it much easier to read
it other wise keep up the good work

Thank for the tip. But just to be clear, if the original text doesn't have the outline, i do not put them.

 

[Rafalga]

I wonder, is there going to be romance? And if so, will the ML be the elf or the demon king?

Spoiler: Romance Heavy spoiler

Mom gonna fuck the dark elf and will get pregnant which will upset the hero son very much.

 

[Syanalassa]

Thank for the tip. But just to be clear, if the original text doesn't have the outline, i do not put them.

For that use outer glow effect instead it will make the text more readable with a minimal effect on the background