Yuusha Party kara Oidasareta Fuguushoku [Wanashi] Yunikku Sukiru [Yajirushi] de Saikyou ni Naru

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Very very interesting. Has potential. So far I would rate it 7.5/10. Hopefully it lives up to it's potential.
 
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So cliche it hurts.

Instant power with zero effort?
Check.

His ex-party of all females secretly want to marry him for no real reason?
Check.

is actually the Chosen One?
Check.

Ho fucking hum.
 
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I feel it would have been so much better if he had had to rely on his own wits for five chapters or so, and then he'd find an opportunity in a Dungeon and grasp it through a wonder of tactical thinking.
Instead he just had a random goddess hand him a power-up half an hour after being exiled from the party. That's like the blandest development ever. Zero effort from MC.
 
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Wow, I've never seen this before. A fantasy story set in a modern Japan where dungeons appeared? And the MC has a bad job and is exiled from their party? And is given a skill by a mysterious girl via a kiss? The sheer creativity. I actually like most isekai-type stuff, but this is vomit-inducing.
 
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This title format has to be a standard template at this point.
The Unfortunate [Class X] Cast Out of the Hero’s Party Will Defy Fate and Become the Strongest with the Unique Skill [Skill Y]

Why would I want to read something that doesn't even bother putting any originality into the title and somehow expect the story to be a fresh take on anything?
You forgot about getting a deus ex machina (usually in form of female plot device) that make their useless thing suddenly useful.
 
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Bro all he needed was a momentum trap. Darn unlocking that skill must be hard. That is a literal game changer for any caster type person.

Also why his team not try to help him level up. He like level 74 while they are over level 200. At least level him up first and see what happens. If nothing happen and he don't get better. Then kick him from the group.

These useless mangas like doing this for some reason. Guess they copy each other so much that they run out of original ideas.
 
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'Good artists copy, great artists steal' so im not really against this template, 'im x useless class and got expelled, but im very powerfull' but it has to have something original.

I like the 'trapmaster' thing class thats a bit different than other OP characters, hope the author makes it so he has to think and be creative. Lil sis adventurer character could also be fun. Him catching up to his old party could also be a bit different than most stories.

7/10 willing to give this a chance
 
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Somehow less generic than that Korean gate Manwha where the MC "tames" the FMC and bullies are still trying to bully the OP main duo.

Still. 4 chapters and 5 girls? Incredible.

The only redeeming thing about it is the Art. Which honestly? Those character designs keep me going. And at least they'll play it for laughs when the Party leader gets called out for not proposing.
 
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not me having the thousand yard stare after seeing that the MC on this one have "Trapper" as a Job Title...
 

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