Yuusha Shoukan ni Makikomareta kedo, Isekai wa Heiwa deshita

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An interesting start. I guess we’ll see if this “peaceful world” is all it’s supposed to be.
 
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"different world" is literally in the first sentence of the description. This needs an isekai tag.
 
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Thats why you never tailgate ppl. Ull get sucked in an isekai
 
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The self-insert was really hard to digest here. A "loser" MC who has no real reason to be a loser, other than being easier to drag around by random characters.
This is gearing up to be a really poor story, in which you have a very explicit beta-MC, dragged around by random pretty girls, in which nothing changes since it's labeled as slice-of-life. Ya'll want passive MCs? I guess this is it.
 
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Yeah, the dialogue the MC had at the start was nonsensical. He's a college student, he's not a soldier or from a country in turmoil.
And making him a lame MC type is just a waste in this kind of setting with no large conflict going on. Not being far more suspicious of his circumstances like the other two girls are, or even what's happening with the guy who is chosen as "hero". As the other commenter said, he's just being dragged around with little to say about it.

If there isn't some espionage stuff going on, then this is really poorly written.
 
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Nothing amazing or groundbreaking yet, but I hope it turns into a good read. At this point I could see it going either way, but even if it ends up being a bit... mediocre, I'll probably keep on.
Hope to see more asap to see some progress (or at least more world building/fleshing out etc.)
 
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Tbh this woulda been halfway decent if it tried to go the Isekai Hourou Meshi path, but it became a Kdrama at the end of chapter 1 for no apparent reason lmao
 
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Just to clarify, this is not in hiatus, ch17 released in April's issue

Also, watch out for it~
 
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Aaaaaaa T T ok if any group's willing to TL this (and obv can't find pretty much all raws) just DM me, I have raws for every chapter and maintain an archive of them as new ones come out
 

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