Zashiki Onna

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I like the art and it was pretty entertaining, for the most part. The ending
was underwhelming though. Urban legends are fun, but they need background to be interesting. Also, the whole subplot with the high school girl didn't add anything to the story. It felt like her role was supposed to be fleshed out more but the serialization was cut short, or something.
 
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Definitely creepy, but yes I agree with the below poster that
the ending felt too rushed and anti-climatic.

It's not bad, but it could've been done better with a few more chapters.
 
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Oh I see now.

This was an interesting read, though rushed in pacing. Strangely enough, nobody else but the protagonist suffers anything tragic. Usually the friend or love interest will die, but this wasn't that story. This was a story about a guy whose story would later become an urban myth, with his conclusion left for us to wonder about, just like the last guy was looking into.
 

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