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This chapter felt kinda slow to me, although I did just watch a fast paced anime ep so maybe is some kinda of perception lag or some mental shit going on in my brain.

Thanks everyone over at LHTranslation for the translation
 
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What is this stupid hole! Fuck.
This story was doing fine without "plot" making bullshit happen for no reason and then this shit happens, a fucking random hole from fucking nowhere in a already explored area because now the fucking author is watching and thinking it wasn't exciting enough to not have bullshit constantly thrown in MCs face.
 
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I thought she'd go all blushy after those compliments, but then he turned it around and defused it with food. These two have great chemistry.

A twin tailed mage girl that doesn’t act like a total annoying brat to the mc?
Yeah, I thought she was going to be the typical tsundere she looks like until a chapter ago. While not much to go on yet, she's absolutely a contender for best girl.

They really went, "Let's not fall into any traAHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
They flagged too hard.

bullshit happen
This is one of those cases where it's perfectly fine to use a Deus ex Machina to get them out of the trouble. Bullshit solutions for bullshit problems.
 
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I was expecting everything to be settled after she wiped out the turtles. I'm curious to see what happens next between the two of them.
 
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What is this stupid hole! Fuck.
This story was doing fine without "plot" making bullshit happen for no reason and then this shit happens, a fucking random hole from fucking nowhere in a already explored area because now the fucking author is watching and thinking it wasn't exciting enough to not have bullshit constantly thrown in MCs face.
Well, you see... That's the beauty of living dungeons. They can put you in a shitty situation at any time 24/7 as long as you're inside their domains.
 
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Well, you see... That's the beauty of living dungeons. They can put you in a shitty situation at any time 24/7 as long as you're inside their domains.
You are forgetting that these are fighting super humans that beat up monsters multiple times their size, for them to fall in a hole just because "living dungeon", well lets just say that has to be some seriously plot heavy hole forming for them to fall into it and not just casually move out of the way, not like they ware busy with monsters or anything.

But that wasn't my point anyway, it was about the author pulling shit out of their arse and smearing it on a previously fine story.
 
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You are forgetting that these are fighting super humans that beat up monsters multiple times their size, for them to fall in a hole just because "living dungeon", well lets just say that has to be some seriously plot heavy hole forming for them to fall into it and not just casually move out of the way, not like they ware busy with monsters or anything.

But that wasn't my point anyway, it was about the author pulling shit out of their arse and smearing it on a previously fine story.
I can only imagine the author trying to forcefully connect her feelings for him by putting them in a distress, tho indeed it would be seen as too forced
 
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Well, that was awfully convenient…

Inconvenient for the characters, of course, but convenient for writing
 
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What an interesting concept for a feat, apparently her BPD causes buffs for her magic, or does her magic give her bpd? It's alot like "i don't want to work anymore" where the demonic pact causes a personality disorder.

I am waiting for the plot twist where BIG ALCHEMY was behind the trend in firing supports to sell more potions, and that they hired up all the support mages to work the alchemy labs and trapped them in long term contracts.
 

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