Zense wa Reikoku Koutei, Konse wa Youjo - Ch. 3 - The Emperor's Smile

[MangaDex]

 

[Saybah]

I think she saying "Finally?!" as she finally get noticed by our FMC after a while. I think FMS sort of ignored her until she finally ask "Who is this?"

I'm happy this get picked up again. I quite like the FMC so far.

 

[mgRdr]

Thanks for picking this up
If I may, the letter spacing and line spacing is sometimes too squished.
Also regarding the "how to erase text", in this particular speech bubble, I would use GIMP's clone tool or Photoshop's clone stamp tool or their analogs in your graphics software of choice. Though I am no cleaner/typesetter so there might be a better way of doing this

 

[Braidzay]

Nice, it's back !

 

[Churkey]

I had shouted in elation that there was a new chapter. This gives me hope to maybe be a scanlator as well one day, paying it forward and all.

One again, thank you!

 

[BayuAH]

Our MC asserts the dominance in the marketplace! MC will be the leader of the thugs!

^Woohoo!

Thank you for the update! Thank you so much for pick this up!

 

[Harbour_Princess]

 

[Ank]

TL notes at the end! You are already doing better than most dumb tl groups here who dont care anymore. Thanks for the chapter

 

[Kampfarsch]

She really isnt bothered by losing her body at all huh
Seems the other guy just reincarnated like that, looking exactly the same
Also guess there isnt going to be further explanation if this is a "two souls", "two personalities" or whatever situation
I guess if she can "sleep" independently she has to be a separate entity and the "ghost" is probably actually there too

 

[Reina4444]

halfway expected her to eat the hoodlums to get rid of the evidence

 

[3leaves2]

Thanks for picking this up! You're doing great~

For stuff like this

Then I think this cleanup you did is perfectly fine! But to get some of the effect of that darker bubble, change up the font instead. In this case something more rough or shaky would've gotten the effect over I think.

 

[Miromir]

It's been so long that I forgot what it was about XD

 

[Nightwave]

thank you for picking this up

 

[Zet1502]

Thank you for the chapter!

 

[lenovoaxioo]

thanks for picking this up, ideally you need a redrawer. . . i wonder if generative fill can do the job

 

[kilogram]

I GREW UP FOR THIS MOMENT

 

[CrimsonNanashi]

page 18 still has untranslated text

 

[dbgecko]

I hope Julius gives Juliana the chance to take control of the body in the future.

 

[Ironclad]

Everyone's glazing for basic typesetting and talking about getting a redrawer when the most important part is subpar.

I'm going to nitpick one page. I'll try to be constructive.
Page 2 Panel 1 Who is speaking? It's Claude isn't it? Why is it in first person tense? I'm guessing it was ambiguous in Japanese. "Live-out" is an awkward direct translation. Only the term "live-in" would appear in regular use. Panel 2 is also awkward. "Her personality is as described". Is this in reference to Page 1 Panel 5 when Juliana refers to her as "funny?" Is "as described" also a direct translation? You usually only see it in reference to writing. It would be more natural and clear to say "As YOU described" or completely rewrite it, "Your description fits, but her housekeeping is excellent." Of course there's a limit to what can conveniently fit in the text bubbles so "Your description fits, but she is a fine maid" might work better even though it could be interpreted differently. You left Juliana's text bubble completely empty. Even if it's just a grunt, gasp, or sigh in response you should put something in bubble.

 

[two_cows]

Everyone's glazing for basic typesetting and talking about getting a redrawer when the most important part is subpar.

I'm going to nitpick one page. I'll try to be constructive.
Page 2 Panel 1 Who is speaking? It's Claude isn't it? Why is it in first person tense? I'm guessing it was ambiguous in Japanese. "Live-out" is an awkward direct translation. Only the term "live-in" would appear in regular use. Panel 2 is also awkward. "Her personality is as described". Is this in reference to Page 1 Panel 5 when Juliana refers to her as "funny?" Is "as described" also a direct translation? You usually only see it in reference to writing. It would be more natural and clear to say "As YOU described" or completely rewrite it, "Your description fits, but her housekeeping is excellent." Of course there's a limit to what can conveniently fit in the text bubbles so "Your description fits, but she is a fine maid" might work better even though it could be interpreted differently. You left Juliana's text bubble completely empty. Even if it's just a grunt, gasp, or sigh in response you should put something in bubble.

Thanks for the constructive criticism. As I mentioned I know it was sloppy on some parts, I have been doing research on how to get better in that aspect. I will keep your comment in mind for the next chapter.