Zettai ni Yuuwaku sarenai Otoko VS Zettai ni Yuuwaku suru Onna - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

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Oof.. I fucking hate it, when Authors just randomly decide to switch the genre for a chapter completely ruining the reading experience in my eyes, since it pretty much breaks the story flow for no reason 😐

Especially since it's not even a .5, or omake chapter, but a genuine story chapter
 
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Oof.. I fucking hate it, when Authors just randomly decide to switch the genre for a chapter completely ruining the reading experience in my eyes, since it pretty much breaks the story flow for no reason 😐

Especially since it's not even a .5, or omake chapter, but a genuine story chapter
I was just about to say that, like I was wondering what the series was about from how long its been since I last read it.
 
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So author made all this occult crap just to tell us that he will end up with her mother? End even that had to be told in a narrator panel instead of just showing some flirting between those two?
The author is lazy and smart (too smart) at the same time.
He want to create a story between a ronin student and a cute senpai but also want a lot of forshadowing characters too so he ended up doing this.
 
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I feel like the author wanted to do something innovative but it failed to come across coherently
It's not innovative, it's been done countless times, but it always falls flat honestly 😐

The only sort of story where you can pull stuff like this is Gintama/Real Estate, since those stories don't take themselves seriously and are made to have pretty much writing freedom, since anything really could happen
 
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I liked this chapter idc what the rest of you lot say. It brings fantasy in a not fantasy world which some might not like. But I don't think this breaks the plot since I think its cool to see such supernatural stuff in a normally not supernatural story. It exists in other stories as well but is normally only hinted at or vague. Either way I found this entertaining
 

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