Wow. Actually felt disgusted by the MC.
I totally see why he did it. The "pretending I'm chill about it and it's not a big deal." The guy's in high school. This behavior is normal. Doesn't mean I don't find it absolutely stupid. Still hate him.
Not sure how to feel about girl's reaction. After overhearing MC bit, she decides to call it a dare. Doing that undoubtedly hurts the other party. On one hand, I actually no longer care the MC got hurt in this situation. On the other, his perspective is sound.
From a writing perspective, pretty shocked that he wrote that bit in the first place. How it normally goes is its written that the "MC is in the right (his chill play unrevealed)." Then it's revealed from girl's perspective the full story.
I totally see why he did it. The "pretending I'm chill about it and it's not a big deal." The guy's in high school. This behavior is normal. Doesn't mean I don't find it absolutely stupid. Still hate him.
Not sure how to feel about girl's reaction. After overhearing MC bit, she decides to call it a dare. Doing that undoubtedly hurts the other party. On one hand, I actually no longer care the MC got hurt in this situation. On the other, his perspective is sound.
From a writing perspective, pretty shocked that he wrote that bit in the first place. How it normally goes is its written that the "MC is in the right (his chill play unrevealed)." Then it's revealed from girl's perspective the full story.