Zou no Haji, Tsuru wa Odoru - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Hicleric]

So cute, almost makes me forget the perpetual pain of having a chronic skin condition

This is really well told. The characters are as clear as necessary and the story doesn't waste time wallowing on the MC's misery

 

[Shamz]

That was hecking nice. Also loved the art. Im actually a big hater and quite critical with how the character acts sometimes but these two character felt flawless for me.

A question tho. Whats with his hands?

 

[Tgxelite]

wow this is good

 

[halcer]

this is pretty enjoyable!

 

[pommefrite]

yeah, I mean this is a pretty peaceful romance, characters feel like humans not stuck in the manga world

 

[Moodyz]

Quite good, this. Both characters don’t have the infuriating bits common to their archetypes.

 

[EchoGirl]

Cute, half expected some kinda skin care brand ad halfway through

So cute, almost makes me forget the perpetual pain of having a chronic skin condition

This is really well told. The characters are as clear as necessary and the story doesn't waste time wallowing on the MC's misery

good luck, sounds tough, i can barely handle dry skin/breakouts let alone something needing prescription doctor help(hopefully dermatologists in ur area are actually decent rather than just pushing pricey luxury brands to use lol)

 

[Netik765]

Hey that's pretty good.

 

[Hicleric]

That was hecking nice. Also loved the art. Im actually a big hater and quite critical with how the character acts sometimes but these two character felt flawless for me.

A question tho. Whats with his hands?

Could be a bad case of eczema/atopic dermatitis, from a genetic or phenotypic tendency to it, or possibly a reaction to his acne meds. Skin tends to thicken in the rashy areas so you end up with hardened, scaly skin (elephant-like, as FMC said) and bloody crevices where it cracks. 'tis fun when it migrates to areas that see a lot of use (e.g., hands, knees, eyelids...plumbing)

The pain you get used to but there's a sense of dysmorphia that never really goes away, even if you're lucky enough to find people who don't see it

Cute, half expected some kinda skin care brand ad halfway through

good luck, sounds tough, i can barely handle dry skin/breakouts let alone something needing prescription doctor help(hopefully dermatologists in ur area are actually decent rather than just pushing pricey luxury brands to use lol)

Right, who needs expensive creams and steroids when used motor oil will do the trick? (I kid, there are actually some pretty good not horrendously expensive options on the market. CeraVe comes highly recommended)

 

[ghostkun]

I really liked that page where she was taking a long stride, lol. Yes, definitely a nice story, told efficiently, beautiful character design, and I found myself admiring Tazuru's personality.

Though, at some point, a thought popped into my mind that this was sorta the "manic pixie girl" archetype I'm seeing in action.

Fun read all the same.

 

[nueee]

I like him because he is nice.

 

[HelioCesar]

so cuteeeeee

 

[AnOchinChin]

Could be a bad case of eczema/atopic dermatitis, from a genetic or phenotypic tendency to it, or possibly a reaction to his acne meds. Skin tends to thicken in the rashy areas so you end up with hardened, scaly skin (elephant-like, as FMC said) and bloody crevices where it cracks. 'tis fun when it migrates to areas that see a lot of use (e.g., hands, knees, eyelids...plumbing)

The pain you get used to but there's a sense of dysmorphia that never really goes away, even if you're lucky enough to find people who don't see it


Right, who needs expensive creams and steroids when used motor oil will do the trick? (I kid, there are actually some pretty good not horrendously expensive options on the market. CeraVe comes highly recommended)

Lmao this oneshot got me putting some cream on my hand lol (Its ceraVe too and its good).

 

[Shamz]

Could be a bad case of eczema/atopic dermatitis, from a genetic or phenotypic tendency to it, or possibly a reaction to his acne meds. Skin tends to thicken in the rashy areas so you end up with hardened, scaly skin (elephant-like, as FMC said) and bloody crevices where it cracks. 'tis fun when it migrates to areas that see a lot of use (e.g., hands, knees, eyelids...plumbing)

I used to have a weird skin condition where my hand skin has these weird pores that leaks water and so my skin cant heal. Dont know if thats eczema but it only healed after half a year or a year idr. But it really didnt seem like the one in the manga tho unless it was an unpleasant memory and i just forget.

 

[ImNotCreativeEnoughtForThese]

Guys just remember that skin block can cause skin cancer. Also if you got some hoing to do use gloves man sheesh.

 

[vinttt]

So cute, almost makes me forget the perpetual pain of having a chronic skin condition

This is really well told. The characters are as clear as necessary and the story doesn't waste time wallowing on the MC's misery

psoriasis?

 

[Hicleric]

psoriasis?

Not exactly, more like atop...the beauty of the human condition is every so often the traits of your existence actually are unique 😂

But when you find a group of people who embrace that uniqueness, life gets good

 

[amondagold]

Wdym My homie smith fixes my shit all the time.