Lady Rose wa Heimin ni Naritai

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this started out good when it was exactly what it said it was, but now the plot is just crap. multiple reincarnaters, someone scheming in the background, convoluted nonsene. why couldn't it have just stayed about the original plot.
I think its cuz the story is supposed to be about the characters are actual people and that the protag shouldn't have assumed they are NPCs. Like from the villianess' perspective she pretty much doomed the nation just by following the plot.
 
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I think its cuz the story is supposed to be about the characters are actual people and that the protag shouldn't have assumed they are NPCs. Like from the villianess' perspective she pretty much doomed the nation just by following the plot.
all of that doesn't change that it's not what the story was about. it's like bait and switch.
 
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all of that doesn't change that it's not what the story was about. it's like bait and switch.
Original plot is she ignores everyone because she assumes they arent real people and causes everything to go wrong because they couldnt sit by and let someone suffer.

The brother doesnt understand why she avoids him, the fiancee doesnt know why she took the fall when shes innocent, the villainess following the plot assuming the MC would stop her ruins everything cuz shes not stopped, her love interest cares about her and stopped liking his own sister cuz of what she did, the puppydog guy believed her lies, the King who raised her like his own daughter saw her get banished and hes definitely going to do this entire plot to get her back.
 
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Original plot is she ignores everyone because she assumes they arent real people and causes everything to go wrong because they couldnt sit by and let someone suffer.

The brother doesnt understand why she avoids him, the fiancee doesnt know why she took the fall when shes innocent, the villainess following the plot assuming the MC would stop her ruins everything cuz shes not stopped, her love interest cares about her and stopped liking his own sister cuz of what she did, the puppydog guy believed her lies, the King who raised her like his own daughter saw her get banished and hes definitely going to do this entire plot to get her back.
and it should have continued like that. I would have never read this if I knew any of this shit was coming. it's not what it says it was going to be.
 
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Anyone else who has read until the end share the opinion that the Nolan and Zero characters were kinda left hanging? Aren't they still trying to wage war on Rose's country? Feels like the ending kinda left that up in the air. Also we are supposed to assume that Nana and Nolan hooked up?
 
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Finally finished reading this.

The beginning is good, but it become boring fast.

It could be better, and more funny.
 
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Literal boring dogshit, she was banished, OK, why not have a literal who adventurer walk in, eat her buns, fall in love with her, and have him progress as an adventurer. While she supports him as an adventurer, he supports her as a baker. Whoever wrote this dogshit should go back to putting fries in bags at mCds. But I'm sure the 99999th "disregarded prinne can't live without the waifu" story will be interesting, women have no taste
 
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Is it really so hard to come up with a somewhat interesting story. Fmc is a banished noble (not isekaid), so she works somewhere (a bakery). Because of her status, there is conflict between her and her co-workers, which she overcomes over time. The Mmc is an adventurer who's just starting out, he has a sweet tooth, so he visits the Fmc's bakery and falls in love with her at first sight, or after eating some sweets that she prepared. The Fmc can then work as the vehicle for the story, the Mmc visits the bakery to enjoy sweets, while telling her how his adventures went. While they keep falling in love, they can get some backstory, and her affection for the Mmc can be deepened because he tries her weird sweets, and because he tries hard, while the Mmc's feelings deepen because she cares for him and supports him. Maybe the Mmc can help her with leftover family affairs. You can have any amount of drama added, like Mmc goes missing and Fmc goes looking for him, co-workers trying to get the Mmc, the Mmc's party members trying to get the Fmc, Fmc getting kidnapped for political reasons...
 
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