Konse wa Goen ga Arimasu you ni! - Vol. 3 Ch. 16

[MangaDex]

 

[_XUwUX_]

I would've folded for the teacher 100%

 

[Tendou10dou]

Some were surprised in the comments of ch.14 that Mizuki's dream is to become a scriptwriter and not an actress due to a wrong translation by the previous group. Since we don't have enough peoples to redo all 6 chapter I started making a list with wrong translation in Ch.1-6 (I'm only done with 1 and 2 so far though) (and it's not EN pred)

Spoiler: Wrong tls by previous group

"Important" Stuff
Chapter 1	Watermark Scans TL	Correct	Notes
Page 4	Not too long ago Mizuki Haruka was just one of my co-stars….		She wasn't her co-star. She just wanted to perform together but now the chance of that happening is getting extremely unlikely.
Page 4	Unlike me, even though we're the same age, I'm still working part-time for chump change.	Unlike some other 27-year-old who're still working only part-time	He's talking about Kazuma not himself
Page 19	We had to bring our work home yesterday		He took it home with him not "we"
Page 19	I really dont want to work at school	Why arent you doing it at school
Page 30	Last time we were here, I was barely talked to her either….	Even after 10 years I'm still not able to hold a conversation
Page 34	Annoying	mean/maybe teasing also fits
Page 47	I'm miu but you can call me "Benzaiten"	I'm Miu, an envoy/messenger of Benzaiten
Page 48	Some even called me the goddess of love		not "me", since she isn't the goddess
Page 48	And thus Benzaiten has come personally to aid you in you path to love	On Benzaiten-sama's oder I've come to help you bind your fate
Page 49	This bream will pull you closer towards the one you are thinking the most about		That tool pulls one only to someone of the opposite sex who you think about
Page 49	How did it feel to touch the object of your affection so intimately boy?		She never says that, she just calls it lucky sukebe
Page 50	Nothing that a heartfelt apology will not solve	No need to thank me
Page 50	So I have decided to give you a chance at fixing your life	You've been granted to chance to redo your life once	It wasn't her who decided that since she isnt Benzaiten
Page 50	However, even with mine power, I cannot hope to fulfill your romance unless I rewound time itself	However, unless you realize/fulfill/bind one of the red strings of fate you will be returned to your previous time/age without any effect
Page 53-54			They forgot a page with Sophie and Mizuki
Chapter 2
Page 2	Goddess	A messenger of a goddess
Page 2	I had planened to choose only one for you	Normaly it's only one
Page 2	But then I thought! "Surely he would fail the first few times around"	But you might fail then
Page 2	So with this many candidates you can try again even if you fail	They are all ones who had some connection to you in the future so rest assured
Page 6	At the rate this simplton is moving, I doubt he's going to confess his love to any of those girls anytime soon	I definitely have to make his confession a success
Page 8	And let this goddess help you succeed at love	…And just borrow my help…	she's still not a goddess
Page 12	What are you still doing here anyway, goddess		she's still not a goddess
Page 13-14			They forgot a page with the tree growing
Page 14	You idiotic goddess!		she's still not a goddess
Page 16			The book has the title "How to do scriptwriting"
Page 17	You're interested in acting mizuki…	Are you interested in scriptwriting
Page 17	That… What I wanted to talk to you about	Just hypotheticaly…
Page 18	She wants to challende herself to become a serious actress	…that girl wants to challenge/attempt something she has wanted to do the whole time
Page 18	I never knew.. That to become an actress was actually her own dream…	I never knew that she had a dream like that (referring to scriptwriting not becoming an actress)
Page 19	I know Mizuki's dream will come true	If it's mizuki she might be able to fulfill her dream…
Page 20	She'll become a brilliant actress like no one has ever seen….	But she already has a bright future as an actress ahead of her…and chasing some uncertain dream leads to nothing but pain
Other things
Chapter 1
	Watermark Scans TL	Correct	Notes
Page 4	As for the prospect of her love life	Marriage is also in her view/She's also already eyeing marriage
Page 6	No relation, no career, just warking day to day as a poor part-timer	No girlfriend, no money/savings, living in a rundown appartment	Freelancer also sounds too positive. He has no steady income and only irregular temporary work/employment
Page 6	All this time working for me and you still haven't improved one bit.	With this, regardles of how much time passes it will never be possible to leave the (photo shoot) work to you
Page 7	I can't see my life ever changing	When did my life start turning wrong/did I turn wrong in my life…
Page 15	It's my old school uniform	It doesn't suit me
Page 27	Come one! We promise not to tell anyone	So don't tell anyone	Mizuki is saying this not that other girl
Page 33	Like I said there was something wrong with the stapler	Don't get too full of yourself just because of staplering
Page 34	In the end we just took our work home and finished it seperately		He took it home with him and finished it solo
Page 36	This is good	So nostalgic
Chapter 2
Page 2	But I'm in the past with both Mizuki and Nanami	But Mizuki and Nanami were (=look) like back then
Page 7	Both of us know there's no way you will accomplish anything without my help!	You can't even have a proper conversation, so what do you even think you can do/achieve wwww

Here are also the missing pages from ch.1 and ch.2

Spoiler: Missing pages ch.1 and ch.2

 

[Cak]

thanks for the TL.

I guess we will see more bloodbath in the next chapter.

 

[Valve]

This possessiveness sure seems like a love boost more than possessiveness boost.
Sure they keep saying "only me" but they are not really bothering much with the others getting closer to MC.

Author is probably saying that competition makes the possessiveness want to attract MC? Or something.

 

[JasonRed]

I'll have to reread the previous chapters. I've forgotten what sensei's secret is.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the scanlation

 

[Talilover]

bro wtf, this chapter went from 0 to 100 with tits out on pretty much every single page. People starting to lose interest or something?

 

[Nekotofu]

They gonna wring him dry tonight...

 

[xSauriaNx]

After reading ahead. Hoshimiya best girl. Sophie 2nd.

also, Miu, totally pantyless girl. The amount of shots of obviously showing she doesn't wear undergarments and flashing her arse at every opportunity is just...

 

[razorshaleh]

The rabbit god always makes situations like MC luck and misfortune at same time

Next Chapter

Spoiler

Thanks for translating

 

[PraetorDragoon]

Less bloodbath than expected.

 

[carleontz]

Damn.. so many tits
So jelly

 

[blablablub]

Some were surprised in the comments of ch.14 that Mizuki's dream is to become a scriptwriter and not an actress due to a wrong translation by the previous group. Since we don't have enough peoples to redo all 6 chapter I started making a list with wrong translation in Ch.1-6 (I'm only done with 1 and 2 so far though) (and it's not EN pred)

Spoiler: Wrong tls by previous group

"Important" Stuff
Chapter 1	Watermark Scans TL	Correct	Notes
Page 4	Not too long ago Mizuki Haruka was just one of my co-stars….		She wasn't her co-star. She just wanted to perform together but now the chance of that happening is getting extremely unlikely.
Page 4	Unlike me, even though we're the same age, I'm still working part-time for chump change.	Unlike some other 27-year-old who're still working only part-time	He's talking about Kazuma not himself
Page 19	We had to bring our work home yesterday		He took it home with him not "we"
Page 19	I really dont want to work at school	Why arent you doing it at school
Page 30	Last time we were here, I was barely talked to her either….	Even after 10 years I'm still not able to hold a conversation
Page 34	Annoying	mean/maybe teasing also fits
Page 47	I'm miu but you can call me "Benzaiten"	I'm Miu, an envoy/messenger of Benzaiten
Page 48	Some even called me the goddess of love		not "me", since she isn't the goddess
Page 48	And thus Benzaiten has come personally to aid you in you path to love	On Benzaiten-sama's oder I've come to help you bind your fate
Page 49	This bream will pull you closer towards the one you are thinking the most about		That tool pulls one only to someone of the opposite sex who you think about
Page 49	How did it feel to touch the object of your affection so intimately boy?		She never says that, she just calls it lucky sukebe
Page 50	Nothing that a heartfelt apology will not solve	No need to thank me
Page 50	So I have decided to give you a chance at fixing your life	You've been granted to chance to redo your life once	It wasn't her who decided that since she isnt Benzaiten
Page 50	However, even with mine power, I cannot hope to fulfill your romance unless I rewound time itself	However, unless you realize/fulfill/bind one of the red strings of fate you will be returned to your previous time/age without any effect
Page 53-54			They forgot a page with Sophie and Mizuki
Chapter 2
Page 2	Goddess	A messenger of a goddess
Page 2	I had planened to choose only one for you	Normaly it's only one
Page 2	But then I thought! "Surely he would fail the first few times around"	But you might fail then
Page 2	So with this many candidates you can try again even if you fail	They are all ones who had some connection to you in the future so rest assured
Page 6	At the rate this simplton is moving, I doubt he's going to confess his love to any of those girls anytime soon	I definitely have to make his confession a success
Page 8	And let this goddess help you succeed at love	…And just borrow my help…	she's still not a goddess
Page 12	What are you still doing here anyway, goddess		she's still not a goddess
Page 13-14			They forgot a page with the tree growing
Page 14	You idiotic goddess!		she's still not a goddess
Page 16			The book has the title "How to do scriptwriting"
Page 17	You're interested in acting mizuki…	Are you interested in scriptwriting
Page 17	That… What I wanted to talk to you about	Just hypotheticaly…
Page 18	She wants to challende herself to become a serious actress	…that girl wants to challenge/attempt something she has wanted to do the whole time
Page 18	I never knew.. That to become an actress was actually her own dream…	I never knew that she had a dream like that (referring to scriptwriting not becoming an actress)
Page 19	I know Mizuki's dream will come true	If it's mizuki she might be able to fulfill her dream…
Page 20	She'll become a brilliant actress like no one has ever seen….	But she already has a bright future as an actress ahead of her…and chasing some uncertain dream leads to nothing but pain
Other things
Chapter 1
	Watermark Scans TL	Correct	Notes
Page 4	As for the prospect of her love life	Marriage is also in her view/She's also already eyeing marriage
Page 6	No relation, no career, just warking day to day as a poor part-timer	No girlfriend, no money/savings, living in a rundown appartment	Freelancer also sounds too positive. He has no steady income and only irregular temporary work/employment
Page 6	All this time working for me and you still haven't improved one bit.	With this, regardles of how much time passes it will never be possible to leave the (photo shoot) work to you
Page 7	I can't see my life ever changing	When did my life start turning wrong/did I turn wrong in my life…
Page 15	It's my old school uniform	It doesn't suit me
Page 27	Come one! We promise not to tell anyone	So don't tell anyone	Mizuki is saying this not that other girl
Page 33	Like I said there was something wrong with the stapler	Don't get too full of yourself just because of staplering
Page 34	In the end we just took our work home and finished it seperately		He took it home with him and finished it solo
Page 36	This is good	So nostalgic
Chapter 2
Page 2	But I'm in the past with both Mizuki and Nanami	But Mizuki and Nanami were (=look) like back then
Page 7	Both of us know there's no way you will accomplish anything without my help!	You can't even have a proper conversation, so what do you even think you can do/achieve wwww

Here are also the missing pages from ch.1 and ch.2

Spoiler: Missing pages ch.1 and ch.2

Wow, some of them are just complete rewrites...

 

[rty79]

Pls put pg15 at Landscape format

 

[dimox]

Wow, some of them are just complete rewrites...

A bit of leeway is fine, since sometimes it makes more sense to word things a bit differently... however, completely changing the content or meaning? Yup, you're bound to wreck up stuff that might be important later on. Like Miu not being Benzaiten.

I would appreciate if the initial chapters get a do-over, especially if there are pages missing and they contain so many errors but I can understand why the current group would be reluctant to fix that mess.

Anyway good to know. Thanks!

 

[BayuAH]

Look! A pair of boobs! -> (.Y.).
— Mark Watney, The Martian

 

[Resound]

so next chap is orgy?

 

[MightFriedRice]

Thank you for translating!

 

[Amenohi]

That cosplayer is subconsciously a stripper isn't she? This is also the second time she got some other girl to strip with her. 100% would take pics or personal collection.