Jinsei Gyakuten - Uwaki sare, Enzai wo Kiserareta Ore ga, Gakuen Ichi no Bishoujo ni Natsukareru - Ch. 1

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"Not giving All 1st (Virginity & Kiss) to eiji is okay"
"being young and having many men is okay"
"Bored dating with Eiji"
"Eiji will forgive me"


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Future LN or WN maybe got scene like this

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"Not giving All 1st (Virginity & Kiss) to eiji is okay"
"being young and having many men is okay"
"Bored dating with Eiji"
"Eiji will forgive me"


9wlw9t.jpg


Future LN or WN maybe got scene like this

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Nah skip the NTR part I really enjoy investigating and bringing the bulliers to their end part, will spend time for full re-read the whole WN.
 
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Another Peak NTR Revenge Manga theme :meguupog: :meguupog: you will definitely hate Miyuki & Kondo lot after reading this Light Novel Vol. 1 spoiler :haa: (Spoiler Volume 2 can see on Page 2 )

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WARNING : Please Don't Click if you Hate Spoiler

-Part 1: The Birthday Betrayal-
  • Today was Eiji's birthday. He was supposed to go on a date with his girlfriend, Miyuki.
  • But Miyuki texted him, saying she couldn't come because of a club meeting.
  • Eiji felt really sad and confused. Not sure what to do, he took a train far from home.
  • He accidentally walked into an area with lots of love hotels.
  • There, he saw Miyuki! She was holding hands with another guy. It was Kondo – the famous star player of the school soccer team.
  • Shocked, Eiji ran up to them. He asked Miyuki why they were together in that place. He grabbed her hand without thinking.
  • Eiji didn't grab hard, but Miyuki acted like it hurt. Kondo immediately punched Eiji. He yelled, "Don't touch my girlfriend!".
  • Kondo told Miyuki to choose: him or Eiji. He told her to say Eiji was just a creepy stalker who imagined she liked him.
  • Miyuki, scared of losing Kondo, broke up with Eiji right there. She chose Kondo, saying she couldn't live without him.

-Part 2: Rumors and Bullying-
  • The next day, gossip exploded at school. Everyone said Eiji had hurt Miyuki. Photos of her slightly red wrist were all over social media (like X).
  • Because Kondo and Miyuki were popular, everyone believed them. No one believed Eiji, just an ordinary student.
  • Eiji got bullied badly: nasty words written on his desk ("Die stalker!"), his shoes hidden or thrown out, his stuff destroyed.

-(Why Miyuki Cheated)-
  • Miyuki did love Eiji, but their relationship felt boring – just normal dates, not even a kiss.
  • A friend suggested Miyuki talk to Kondo, a senior known for his love life, for advice.
  • At first, Miyuki was unsure about Kondo. But he treated her like a princess, always complimenting her. Slowly, she started liking him.
  • One day, caught up in the moment, Kondo kissed her. Miyuki gave in to him. He took all her "first times." After that, she felt trapped and couldn't leave him.

-Part 3: Kondo's Cruelty & Meeting Ai-
  • When Eiji bumped into Kondo at school, he asked Kondo why he was doing this.
  • Kondo just smiled meanly. He said he loved ruining people's lives. He bragged about a girl in junior high – she was dating her childhood friend (an otaku). Kondo flirted with her, made her dump her boyfriend right in front of him, and loved seeing how broken the guy looked.
  • Kondo dumped that girl after graduation. She was smart before, but being with Kondo messed her up and she fell behind in school. He loved tricking girls into thinking it was real love when it was just a game to him.
  • Hearing this made Eiji feel sick. He almost fainted. The pain was so bad he thought about ending his own life.
  • Looking for a quiet spot at school, he found a first-year student named Ai (famous for being super smart and beautiful) on the roof, about to jump.
  • Seeing Ai like that snapped Eiji out of his own dark thoughts. He rushed to stop her, almost falling off himself.

-Part 4: A New Connection & Miyuki's Regret-
  • After saving Ai, Eiji took her to his house (which was also a restaurant). Ai felt warm and welcome with Eiji's family. Their food cheered her up.
  • Ai realized something: Lots of guys had promised to protect her, but it felt fake. Seeing Eiji risk himself to save someone he just met made her heart flutter. She started falling for him.
  • Ai and Eiji started going to school together. Seeing the school's top girl with the most hated boy shocked everyone. The nasty gossip about Eiji started to fade.
  • Ai's friends asked why she was with Eiji, knowing the rumors. Ai asked them back: "Did you see it happen?" She didn't believe the gossip. Being with Eiji, she knew he wasn't the type to hurt a girl.

-(Miyuki's Jealousy)-
  • Miyuki saw Eiji holding hands with Ai and felt jealous! She still thought of Eiji as hers, forgetting she dumped him.
  • Wanting to apologize, Miyuki went to Eiji's house. She met his mom.
  • Eiji's mom already knew Miyuki was cheating! She'd seen Miyuki holding hands with another guy before Eiji found out. Disappointed, she told Miyuki she wasn't good enough for Eiji and to stay away.
  • Heartbroken, Miyuki went home. To escape her feelings, she called Kondo. Yep, she asked him to come over (while her mom was out) to have sex and forget her pain.

-Part 5: Karma Hits Kondo & Miyuki-
  • Kondo played badly at a university soccer practice. The coach and players said he wasn't good enough. Angry and needing to vent, he called Miyuki to meet.
  • They headed to a love hotel.
  • The otaku guy Kondo hurt in junior high (now friends with Eiji) saw them go in! He took pictures. He also called the police because you have to be 18 to enter love hotels.
  • (This otaku became lonely and distrustful after Kondo ruined his life. In high school, Eiji reached out to him, asking about books. They became friends. Hearing Eiji was hurt by Kondo too made the otaku furious. He followed Kondo, gathering evidence – like photos of Kondo going to Miyuki's house. Seeing them enter the hotel was the proof he needed).
  • The police arrived and arrested Kondo and Miyuki at the hotel.
  • Miyuki's mom was hysterical at the police station. She couldn't believe her daughter cheated on kind Eiji and was caught in a love hotel with another guy. The shock made her faint.

-The Ending (Volume 1)-
  • Kondo and Miyuki finally faced some consequences for their actions.
  • Kondo and his dad thought they could cover everything up. They planned to use Miyuki even more.
  • But they didn't know: The otaku had already sent the photos to the high school soccer coach. If that didn't work, he was ready to post everything online to ruin Kondo and smear his dad's name (who was running for mayor!).
  • Also, the former mayor (a friend of Eiji's dad who loved Eiji like a grandson) was getting involved. He wouldn't forgive anyone who hurt Eiji.
  • And the school? The principal and teachers were ready to punish the bullies and even report them to the police.

Thank you for translating, may NTR lovers go straight to hell

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YOOOOOO NOW THATS FIREEEE
 
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Meh, mid. Defenseless MC, bitchy antagonist, shit ton of tropes, not really my taste
 
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Future LN or WN maybe got scene like this

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Before I say anything else, this scene in White Album 2 might be the first and only time I've ever been genuinely enraged at any romance anime, manga, or light/web novel. So the vileness of this image hits extra hard to me LOL.

But I had to make an account just because of my reaction to this story and the subsequent spoilers I read here, because I wasn't expecting it. I've read many NTR stories over the years, and I agree with what others said about this, in that the unique part isn't the generic NTR slop beginning, but the detective work from side characters later in uncovering everything that leads to the revenge wish fulfillment stuff. So I can see how it ended up gaining an decent audience, because it hits all the revenge highs pretty well, even if it's nothing original in that sense.

But what I found most interesting, strangely, was Miyuki and the way she was written. Normally the NTRd girl loses all sense of reason after succumbing to the other dude's dick, permanently removing any way back to a relationship with the MC. Even in cases where the MC gets revenge, the girl usually has some ending where she's living as a prostitute or close to it, jumping around with different random dudes.

But Miyuki is different. She was given a self-aware side, so rather than a girlfriend in an NTR story, she's more like a cheating character in older soap operas, the kind that's trying to live two separate lives and ignoring the contradiction and the guilt underneath it all. After letting her dick-loving side win over and choosing Kondo over Eiji, she's still in self-denial mode with the whole bullying thing, because she's allowed to be.

But after reaching rock bottom in all the later chapters of the novel, she has to confront all the stuff she did. And unlike other characters like Kondo and the Club President girl, she had a side that felt guilty from the beginning, she just needed to hit rock bottom to get the full guilt to the front of her brain. So I disagree a bit with this:
That being said, I actually like that the author went all out in unironically establishing her as a weak NTR hentai cock addicted slut while also making her selfaware.
Like 99% of revenge stories somehow explain away their villains but here it was made sure that she legit can not ever be redeemed- she legit just is a terrible and stupid human being.
I actually do think she has flimsy path to redemption, but it requires a complete remake of her life, one where she no longer has any interactions with the old circle of people she had around, because all those bridges are completely burned.

I remembered this short manga story about a girl who is a fantastic person in almost every sense, constantly volunteering and helping people, and even starting a successful business. All great, except that she's been obsessed with her childhood friend for years and creepily shows up in front of him one day, and of course he doesn't remember, which creates scenes that contradict with her normal life.

I think a story about Miyuki a few years later, maybe in college, trying to live like that, basically a rebound where she seems to be living successfully, and everyone thinks she's super nice or whatnot, but she's actually hiding the super dark secret that she would eventually have to tell to anyone that gets really close, would make for an interesting story. Maybe it would have some arc where a character tracks down all the old people involved to hear their side of the story to compare with hers lol.

Basically, what I want is this:

Hypothetical Title: "The really nice college girl who volunteers in the neighborhood was once an NTR heroine b*tch who ruined her childhood friend's life"

And the cover would be a variation of this:
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Someone please write this, because I want to read it.
 
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Before I say anything else, this scene in White Album 2 might be the first and only time I've ever been genuinely enraged at any romance anime, manga, or light/web novel. So the vileness of this image hits extra hard to me LOL.

But I had to make an account just because of my reaction to this story and the subsequent spoilers I read here, because I wasn't expecting it. I've read many NTR stories over the years, and I agree with what others said about this, in that the unique part isn't the generic NTR slop beginning, but the detective work from side characters later in uncovering everything that leads to the revenge wish fulfillment stuff. So I can see how it ended up gaining an decent audience, because it hits all the revenge highs pretty well, even if it's nothing original in that sense.

But what I found most interesting, strangely, was Miyuki and the way she was written. Normally the NTRd girl loses all sense of reason after succumbing to the other dude's dick, permanently removing any way back to a relationship with the MC. Even in cases where the MC gets revenge, the girl usually has some ending where she's living as a prostitute or close to it, jumping around with different random dudes.

But Miyuki is different. She was given a self-aware side, so rather than a girlfriend in an NTR story, she's more like a cheating character in older soap operas, the kind that's trying to live two separate lives and ignoring the contradiction and the guilt underneath it all. After letting her dick-loving side win over and choosing Kondo over Eiji, she's still in self-denial mode with the whole bullying thing, because she's allowed to be.

But after reaching rock bottom in all the later chapters of the novel, she has to confront all the stuff she did. And unlike other characters like Kondo and the Club President girl, she had a side that felt guilty from the beginning, she just needed to hit rock bottom to get the full guilt to the front of her brain. So I disagree a bit with this:

I actually do think she has flimsy path to redemption, but it requires a complete remake of her life, one where she no longer has any interactions with the old circle of people she had around, because all those bridges are completely burned.

I remembered this short manga story about a girl who is a fantastic person in almost every sense, constantly volunteering and helping people, and even starting a successful business. All great, except that she's been obsessed with her childhood friend for years and creepily shows up in front of him one day, and of course he doesn't remember, which creates scenes that contradict with her normal life.

I think a story about Miyuki a few years later, maybe in college, trying to live like that, basically a rebound where she seems to be living successfully, and everyone thinks she's super nice or whatnot, but she's actually hiding the super dark secret that she would eventually have to tell to anyone that gets really close, would make for an interesting story. Maybe it would have some arc where a character tracks down all the old people involved to hear their side of the story to compare with hers lol.

Basically, what I want is this:

Hypothetical Title: "The really nice college girl who volunteers in the neighborhood was once an NTR heroine b*tch who ruined her childhood friend's life"

And the cover would be a variation of this:
491843123_1363684672425863_7225850151016705085_n.jpg


Someone please write this, because I want to read it.
People would unironically be more willing to forgive a former mass murderer than a former cheater (people being me)
 
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needs to end with a double suicide for both of them
Do you mean that the manga should have ended in the second chapter by the double suicide of Aono Eiji and Ichijou Ai because the “life reversal” part is much less believable than being wronged and then driven to kill themselves?
 
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Another Peak NTR Revenge Manga theme :meguupog: :meguupog: you will definitely hate Miyuki & Kondo lot after reading this Light Novel Vol. 1 spoiler :haa: (Spoiler Volume 2 can see on Page 2 )

9w1vnt.jpg


WARNING : Please Don't Click if you Hate Spoiler

-Part 1: The Birthday Betrayal-
  • Today was Eiji's birthday. He was supposed to go on a date with his girlfriend, Miyuki.
  • But Miyuki texted him, saying she couldn't come because of a club meeting.
  • Eiji felt really sad and confused. Not sure what to do, he took a train far from home.
  • He accidentally walked into an area with lots of love hotels.
  • There, he saw Miyuki! She was holding hands with another guy. It was Kondo – the famous star player of the school soccer team.
  • Shocked, Eiji ran up to them. He asked Miyuki why they were together in that place. He grabbed her hand without thinking.
  • Eiji didn't grab hard, but Miyuki acted like it hurt. Kondo immediately punched Eiji. He yelled, "Don't touch my girlfriend!".
  • Kondo told Miyuki to choose: him or Eiji. He told her to say Eiji was just a creepy stalker who imagined she liked him.
  • Miyuki, scared of losing Kondo, broke up with Eiji right there. She chose Kondo, saying she couldn't live without him.

-Part 2: Rumors and Bullying-
  • The next day, gossip exploded at school. Everyone said Eiji had hurt Miyuki. Photos of her slightly red wrist were all over social media (like X).
  • Because Kondo and Miyuki were popular, everyone believed them. No one believed Eiji, just an ordinary student.
  • Eiji got bullied badly: nasty words written on his desk ("Die stalker!"), his shoes hidden or thrown out, his stuff destroyed.

-(Why Miyuki Cheated)-
  • Miyuki did love Eiji, but their relationship felt boring – just normal dates, not even a kiss.
  • A friend suggested Miyuki talk to Kondo, a senior known for his love life, for advice.
  • At first, Miyuki was unsure about Kondo. But he treated her like a princess, always complimenting her. Slowly, she started liking him.
  • One day, caught up in the moment, Kondo kissed her. Miyuki gave in to him. He took all her "first times." After that, she felt trapped and couldn't leave him.

-Part 3: Kondo's Cruelty & Meeting Ai-
  • When Eiji bumped into Kondo at school, he asked Kondo why he was doing this.
  • Kondo just smiled meanly. He said he loved ruining people's lives. He bragged about a girl in junior high – she was dating her childhood friend (an otaku). Kondo flirted with her, made her dump her boyfriend right in front of him, and loved seeing how broken the guy looked.
  • Kondo dumped that girl after graduation. She was smart before, but being with Kondo messed her up and she fell behind in school. He loved tricking girls into thinking it was real love when it was just a game to him.
  • Hearing this made Eiji feel sick. He almost fainted. The pain was so bad he thought about ending his own life.
  • Looking for a quiet spot at school, he found a first-year student named Ai (famous for being super smart and beautiful) on the roof, about to jump.
  • Seeing Ai like that snapped Eiji out of his own dark thoughts. He rushed to stop her, almost falling off himself.

-Part 4: A New Connection & Miyuki's Regret-
  • After saving Ai, Eiji took her to his house (which was also a restaurant). Ai felt warm and welcome with Eiji's family. Their food cheered her up.
  • Ai realized something: Lots of guys had promised to protect her, but it felt fake. Seeing Eiji risk himself to save someone he just met made her heart flutter. She started falling for him.
  • Ai and Eiji started going to school together. Seeing the school's top girl with the most hated boy shocked everyone. The nasty gossip about Eiji started to fade.
  • Ai's friends asked why she was with Eiji, knowing the rumors. Ai asked them back: "Did you see it happen?" She didn't believe the gossip. Being with Eiji, she knew he wasn't the type to hurt a girl.

-(Miyuki's Jealousy)-
  • Miyuki saw Eiji holding hands with Ai and felt jealous! She still thought of Eiji as hers, forgetting she dumped him.
  • Wanting to apologize, Miyuki went to Eiji's house. She met his mom.
  • Eiji's mom already knew Miyuki was cheating! She'd seen Miyuki holding hands with another guy before Eiji found out. Disappointed, she told Miyuki she wasn't good enough for Eiji and to stay away.
  • Heartbroken, Miyuki went home. To escape her feelings, she called Kondo. Yep, she asked him to come over (while her mom was out) to have sex and forget her pain.

-Part 5: Karma Hits Kondo & Miyuki-
  • Kondo played badly at a university soccer practice. The coach and players said he wasn't good enough. Angry and needing to vent, he called Miyuki to meet.
  • They headed to a love hotel.
  • The otaku guy Kondo hurt in junior high (now friends with Eiji) saw them go in! He took pictures. He also called the police because you have to be 18 to enter love hotels.
  • (This otaku became lonely and distrustful after Kondo ruined his life. In high school, Eiji reached out to him, asking about books. They became friends. Hearing Eiji was hurt by Kondo too made the otaku furious. He followed Kondo, gathering evidence – like photos of Kondo going to Miyuki's house. Seeing them enter the hotel was the proof he needed).
  • The police arrived and arrested Kondo and Miyuki at the hotel.
  • Miyuki's mom was hysterical at the police station. She couldn't believe her daughter cheated on kind Eiji and was caught in a love hotel with another guy. The shock made her faint.

-The Ending (Volume 1)-
  • Kondo and Miyuki finally faced some consequences for their actions.
  • Kondo and his dad thought they could cover everything up. They planned to use Miyuki even more.
  • But they didn't know: The otaku had already sent the photos to the high school soccer coach. If that didn't work, he was ready to post everything online to ruin Kondo and smear his dad's name (who was running for mayor!).
  • Also, the former mayor (a friend of Eiji's dad who loved Eiji like a grandson) was getting involved. He wouldn't forgive anyone who hurt Eiji.
  • And the school? The principal and teachers were ready to punish the bullies and even report them to the police.

Thank you for translating, may NTR lovers go straight to hell

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Obrigado pela explicação 🫂
 

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