AAAAA !!!! 🤯 I GASPED.. I had such a knee jerk reaction reading this yesterday but now, thinking back on it, as a storyteller myself, my mind is buzzing............. I can't tell what's going to happen but I'm on the edge of my seat !!
I love the title "Overlapping," for this chapter - that's really such a theme in general for kagihira. where do they meet? their mindsets contrast a lot but, when put into a different context, they align. I love that Kagiura's bad basketball experience was brought up in this, showing how Hirano's words made sense to him but only clicked in his heart now. the context was different… he could see the true meaning of Hirano's words, now that he was given time to reflect on them and grow as a person.
same with Hirano…! it's so interesting to me that Kagi had never thought about kissing Hirano until Niibashi asked him. and then, as the story progressed, it was Hirano who thought about kissing - he's the one who brought it up to Kagi, too. it makes sense to me, the disconnect between their thoughts and their hearts, adjusting their context, letting these seemingly contrasting concepts finally overlap.
as a Certified Demiromantic Asexual™ (lol, note: my experience is not universal), I unfortunately relate to the “I don't like this” - only to later like it depending on the specific person I'm with, which also changes depending on how my relationship progresses with them, and also if they like it (especially if it's how they show affection), I start to like it too, charmed by the idea that it makes them happy.
I'm not sure if that's what's going on with Hirano but, from a storytelling perspective, I feel so intrigued by the possibilities. I actually think it'd be so powerful that Hirano disliked the last time Kagi was seemingly impulsive (when Kagi hugged him), only for this next seemingly impulsive act to feel completely different for him. now that he knows he loves Kagi, everything has shifted, he's unable to go back, unable to think the way he used to. his thoughts and heart are finally clicking… so, I'm curious if Hirano will enjoy the kiss, dislike it, or if it'll make him question even more? how will he feel? is this a turning point? or is it just another step in their journey? it can go anywhere 🤯
idk! if I take this out of the context of kagihira I'm a bit shocked and I'm like “please don't do this, life isn't an exercise in symbolic storytelling,” but I do think because of sensei's storytelling, I wanted to look a bit deeper. in the context of kagihira, it's different - I feel like that's probably why we had that little moment during the scavenger hunt where Kagi didn't take Hirano's hand until Hirano told him it was ok, trying to further the idea that maybe Kagi's not as impulsive as his behavior makes him appear.
it seemed impulsive, like Kagi was pushing Hirano's boundaries and not getting consent - but I don't think that was supposed to be the point (even though irl it is regardless lol 😭). what I think is interesting is when Hirano told Kagi he wanted to give Kagi a reply, Kagi seemed to automatically recognize that Hirano was going to reciprocate. throughout the series, there's a lot of symbolism on how they contrast (even in this chapter, things like specifically bringing out that Hirano was on the opposing team during the scavenger hunt, etc) - but this is the chapter where they finally came together, finally aligned, just the two of them. Kagi seemed to know what Hirano was thinking. and Hirano seemed to know what Kagi was feeling, what Kagi's “love” was. all of Kagi's kind words to Hirano in this chapter deeply touched Hirano, he recognized it as Kagi’s love. to me, it seems that maybe despite both of them being clumsy, suddenly the heart (Kagi) and the mind (Hirano) overlapped, finally clicking.
FHSJF that was cheesy and messy ughhhhhh 🤣 anyway this was too much and I sound like an art student during critique 🤣 but those are my thoughts…… I have many feelings.. I love them 😭
edit: I forgot to say, thank you so much for the TL !!! 💖💖💖