Isekai kara Kikan Shitara Chikyuu mo Kanari Fantasy deshita. Ato, Make Heroine-domo Kocchi Minna. - Ch. 5

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so alien and angel in the same chapter?

pls don't say this manga is just an ads for the light novel (-___-)
 
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Thanks for the chapter, but do take care that you get the order of pages right, you swapped the order of page 22 and 23. The actions between the two don't really make sense, like MC says "guess that takes care of things", then is fighting again for just a moment, and the alien bf noticing something matches better with him calling out to alien gf. But a major tell is the page layout, the gap at the side of the page should alternate which side it's on every page, but around 22 and 23 it doesn't. I also checked out 6.1 and you disordered some pages there too. Still, looking forward to more.
 
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Alien was more interesting than the angel. Angel is already boring and she only just got introduced, yet Jack has proven himself to be:
  • Understanding of cultures other than his own
  • A loyal boyfriend/soon to be husband
  • NOT wearing some cutesy loli disguise
Angel was designed to fail.
 
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MC : "I think I'll go have some ramen"

Every other being in this manga for some reason : "And I took that personally"
 
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Funny how, despite using so many genres and tropes, the author can nearly write a single type of introduction for a female character: fight first, talk later (if at all).
Even the one who came in with the intent to strike a deal with him opened with an ambush.
That's fine when we're talking about villains, but I think that these ones aren't supposed to be seen as such.
The alien managed to subvert that quite well (maybe because he's male, so he's allowed some originality... like the cop), but the angel here is just repeating the pattern. Now, give us a one-shot defeat and it will repeat the pattern fully. And that's not exactly fun.
 
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Blud is really speedrunning all the fictional troupes. :kek: :kek: All my blud wants is to play Pokemon Mystery Dungeon DX on his Switch, damn fantasies and their droopy leather-knitted pants.
 
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Just need time travelers and an ambiguously normal human to form a SOS club.
 
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Yeah, there's a game MC can play with her. Soccer. She can be the ball.
 
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Thanks for the chapter, but do take care that you get the order of pages right, you swapped the order of page 22 and 23. The actions between the two don't really make sense, like MC says "guess that takes care of things", then is fighting again for just a moment, and the alien bf noticing something matches better with him calling out to alien gf. But a major tell is the page layout, the gap at the side of the page should alternate which side it's on every page, but around 22 and 23 it doesn't. I also checked out 6.1 and you disordered some pages there too. Still, looking forward to more.
Thanks for pointing it out. Later on, there was also an issue with pages 30 and 31, I’ve already corrected it on both platforms. My apologies!
 

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