Akebi-chan no Sailor Fuku - Ch. 86 - This Close?

[MangaDex]

 

[randomuser_7789]

Thank you for saving us from Jerkington's shitty TL

 

[Cinsyac]

That looks much better than the other version, thanks. What's going on with the sound effects in this one, though? Is that Chinese?

 

[JH7391]

That looks much better than the other version, thanks. What's going on with the sound effects in this one, though? Is that Chinese?

yeps
I assume it's from the official CN TL?

 

[Cinsyac]

yeps
I assume it's from the official CN TL?

Aw man, so are we looking at a translation of a translation?

 

[JH7391]

Aw man, so are we looking at a translation of a translation?

apparently 2deep used CN raws cuz they were higher quality
I can tell you that this reads fairly faithfully to the JP raws tho

...a few things I disagree with, but that's me and my TL tendencies

 

[UdenEmpati]

Mai is so goddamned punk rock.

p29 might be my favorite part of this chapter.
that, or p35. Kind of a toss up, but either way it's an awesome sequence & culmination.

 

[BobbyHenderson]

That looks much better than the other version, thanks. What's going on with the sound effects in this one, though? Is that Chinese?

yeps
I assume it's from the official CN TL?

I translated it from the official Japanese release, but since their website doesn’t allow page downloads, I used pages from a Chinese TL I found.
I’ve never done translation or redraws before, so it's probably far from perfect and I don’t plan to continue with this series. I’d much prefer if the problem was sorted out and the original scanlation team returned.

 

[JH7391]

I translated it from the official Japanese release, but since their website doesn’t allow page downloads, I used pages from a Chinese TL I found.
I’ve never done translation or redraws before, so it's probably far from perfect and I don’t plan to continue with this series. I’d much prefer if the problem was sorted out and the original scanlation team returned.

You did better than the other guy, and that's all we can be thankful for. It's very well done for being your first attempt!
I do hope 2deep comes back for the next chapters tho

Spoiler: My interpretation of the text

(I feel like pg 28 should be "that's 'cause it was you, Mai" or something along those lines, and 29 maybe more of a "I'll stand in front of you")

 

[Cinsyac]

I translated it from the official Japanese release, but since their website doesn’t allow page downloads, I used pages from a Chinese TL I found.
I’ve never done translation or redraws before, so it's probably far from perfect and I don’t plan to continue with this series. I’d much prefer if the problem was sorted out and the original scanlation team returned.

Aw I was hoping you were going to be a regular alternative to the other guy. Well, still, thanks! I thought it was a nice touch that you used the same logo and fonts as the OG group.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the scanlation

 

[RonRay]

I translated it from the official Japanese release, but since their website doesn’t allow page downloads, I used pages from a Chinese TL I found.
I’ve never done translation or redraws before, so it's probably far from perfect and I don’t plan to continue with this series. I’d much prefer if the problem was sorted out and the original scanlation team returned.

Thank you for saving us from that other guy ! I am currently doing ch85 (if you plan to do it then I will stop) , as it too was bad and I lurked around 2deep scan discord a little they don't plan on doing 85-86 !

 

[BobbyHenderson]

You did better than the other guy, and that's all we can be thankful for. It's very well done for being your first attempt!
I do hope 2deep comes back for the next chapters tho

Spoiler: My interpretation of the text

(I feel like pg 28 should be "that's 'cause it was you, Mai" or something along those lines, and 29 maybe more of a "I'll stand in front of you")

Thanks! I hesitated quite a bit on the wording for page 28 actually. I’ll edit those soon.

 

[BobbyHenderson]

Aw I was hoping you were going to be a regular alternative to the other guy. Well, still, thanks! I thought it was a nice touch that you used the same logo and fonts as the OG group.

I'm not good enough in Japanese to be a proper translator, and luckily this chapter didn’t need much redrawing since I’m way worst at that.
Thanks for noticing though, I tried to stay as faithful as possible to their translation, both visually and in my translation choices (like using moon-viewing festival instead of moon-viewing party)

 

[BobbyHenderson]

Thank you for saving us from that other guy ! I am currently doing ch85 (if you plan to do it then I will stop) , as it too was bad and I lurked around 2deep scan discord a little they don't plan on doing 85-86 !

I don’t plan on translating it so it’s fine!
ch 85 was already kind of a mess, but ch 86 was ridiculous, so I just did this one.

 

[RonRay]

I don’t plan on translating it so it’s fine!
ch 85 was already kind of a mess, but ch 86 was ridiculous, so I just did this one.

Ok then I will keep working on Ch85!

 

[Cinsyac]

I'm not good enough in Japanese to be a proper translator, and luckily this chapter didn’t need much redrawing since I’m way worst at that.
Thanks for noticing though, I tried to stay as faithful as possible to their translation, both visually and in my translation choices (like using moon-viewing festival instead of moon-viewing party)

It's okay, we'll have this chapter as an alternative at the very least which is already great. And the respect for 2deep and for continuity is very much appreciated.

 

[shemper]

Thank you for your work!

 

[WindMil]

Thank you for your work! definitely better than the other guy, was he just making stuff up when translating? The hell happened? especially the scene in the tunnel.

 

[BobbyHenderson]

Thank you for your work! definitely better than the other guy, was he just making stuff up when translating? The hell happened? especially the scene in the tunnel.

I think he simply gave up on translating this part, and even when he did try, there were many mistakes