Parallel Paradise - Ch. 301 - Unseen World, Unerasable Desires

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Author: "Oh. Right, I never addressed this part of the plot. Guess I need to get that out of the way"
Yeah sure ok, whatever you say Lynn.
Couldn't you make collision magic by riding a rollercoaster. No need for fucking up his body in the other world.
Ah yes, time travel energy from a simple faceplant to the floor from a slightly high place. Sure.

Fucking "collision energy"?! How many of these girls have fallen out of a fucking tree or something and accidentally time traveled then?! Or had a door slammed in their face too hard or some shit. Oh no! My "collision energy" is too high!!! Oh fuck, Oh god I'm time traveling!!

You really expecting me to believe hitting the ground hard is all it takes to time travel?

. . .

Okay fine, the dumbest plot point so far but lets keep rolling. Clearly by the time we are doing all this right now, we have a moon sized AI to (somehow) do this remotely. (but only when its not cloudy!)

...So explain how the fuck thats supposed to be working in Yota's time prior to the giant ass moon AI?

Plotholes so big, you could fit a goddamn moon sized AI through them.


...We sure this isnt getting axed and he is trying to shit together an ending?
 
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Fucking "collision energy"?! How many of these girls have fallen out of a fucking tree or something and accidentally time traveled then?! Or had a door slammed in their face too hard or some shit. Oh no! My "collision energy" is too high!!! Oh fuck, Oh god I'm time traveling!!

You really expecting me to believe hitting the ground hard is all it takes to time travel?

. . .

Okay fine, the dumbest plot point so far but lets keep rolling. Clearly by the time we are doing all this right now, we have a moon sized AI to (somehow) do this remotely. (but only when its not cloudy!)

...So explain how the fuck thats supposed to be working in Yota's time prior to the giant ass moon AI?

Plotholes so big, you could fit a goddamn moon sized AI through them.


...We sure this isnt getting axed and he is trying to shit together an ending?
You're gonna make @DLRevan go ballistic again.

Why don't you understand already that this is a literary masterpiece?

Those boobies and gushing wet pussies need to be defended from scum like you who don't have the media literacy to appreciate them.:wooow:
 
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NGL that makes sense, I was wondering why a loop would do anything if no one has memories of it but if you adjust where the loop starts from each time you can try and find a point where it works better, it would be even better though if you made it so he knew the weaknesses of all the witches BEFORE he has to fight them.
Oh no! My "collision energy" is too high!!! Oh fuck, Oh god I'm time traveling!!
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Okay fine, the dumbest plot point so far but lets keep rolling. Clearly by the time we are doing all this right now, we have a moon sized AI to (somehow) do this remotely. (but only when its not cloudy!)

...So explain how the fuck thats supposed to be working in Yota's time prior to the giant ass moon AI?

Plotholes so big, you could fit a goddamn moon sized AI through them.


...We sure this isnt getting axed and he is trying to shit together an ending?
1. Answer would obviously be line of site is required, I don't know why you'd find that so hard to get your head around
2. As soon as time travel is invented it has always existed for what should be fairly obvious reasons
 
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Author: "Oh. Right, I never addressed this part of the plot. Guess I need to get that out of the way"
Audience: "I need a new direction to criticize the author so I can still appear smarter than him and his 'dumb' manga."

Last chapter people were commenting that restarting the world now and resetting everything would be stupid even though it was obvious that wasn't going to happen (as if anything that just lands in one chapter should be taken at face value in this series).

I wonder what new way readers will invent next chapter so they can pretend their IQ is that much higher.

You're gonna make @DLRevan go ballistic again.

Why don't you understand already that this is a literary masterpiece?

Those boobies and gushing wet pussies need to be defended from scum like you who don't have the media literacy to appreciate them.:wooow:

Yes, use hyperbole and put stuff in my mouth lol. Either its a masterpiece of literature or its trash. I never said it was either.

Why can't it just be Lynn's crazy, sometimes off-putting, sometimes wild, some times thought provoking, always surprising work?

That's what manga is. It can be loads of things. Media literacy isn't the ability tell when something is a masterpiece, it's to appreciate different kinds of work. Certainly media literacy isn't the ability to take offense at a work that the reader has sole power to choose not to read, or to blab to others about how bad it is while they can't stop reading.

You're right about one thing. If that's what you really think, then you don't have media literacy, I do. Thanks. You want me to put stuff in your mouth too? Maybe you're just a gutter-brained porn addict, since that's the first thing that comes to your mind. Since you don't want to look like a piece of trash who just reads this to fap, you have to find something else smarty-pants to say about the series. What better way than to run down this spiel about figuring out the author and calling out their work as garbage?
 
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Okay this is Chat GPT-level of stupid, because Ms. AI why don't you send him there 5 years before instead of 10 years later? That way Lilia and Hanahana would have more pregnant time? Why the hell is she handicapping herself? come on don't you understand how time travel works?!

Fucking "collision energy"?! How many of these girls have fallen out of a fucking tree or something and accidentally time traveled then?! Or had a door slammed in their face too hard or some shit. Oh no! My "collision energy" is too high!!! Oh fuck, Oh god I'm time traveling!!

You really expecting me to believe hitting the ground hard is all it takes to time travel?
Maaaaan you're gonna make me defend this series...

Speed tends to be the usual trope for sci-fi time travel, Back to the Future, Star Trek (Sun slingshot variant), Men in Black 3. This is just the expansion of this idea. The AI also does say that she needs to be present for it to occur so it's not just "Collision energy". Plus I would guess it would have something to do with potential energy becoming kinetic energy or something

Before you say "there's no way he's that smart" he actually does seem to be given the hard sci-fi tropes he often uses one of his favorites is Arthur C. Clark's 3rd law and the balance between it: how girls see all technology as magic, but Yota sees it as technology. However there are things that he considers magic in this world that are likely just significantly advanced technology.
...So explain how the fuck thats supposed to be working in Yota's time prior to the giant ass moon AI?
because they've been hinting at Hollow moon theory.... actually now I can't remember if I read that in the raws, but basically the AI has always been on the moon or the AI was sent up there with Chang'e because we can see a potentially younger version of it in Chapter 140 crying at his death.... if he even remembers that scene and he retcons a lot, but as of right now we can be reasonably sure the AI did exist in Yota's time
...We sure this isnt getting axed and he is trying to shit together an ending?

Nah, if that were happening we'd get something like a Goth loli in aviators using an MP5

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I've been reading for like 150 chapters over the last 4-5 years and I don't think the gem/bead thing has come up in ages, and I'm just now noticing most characters even have them. :pacman:
 
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I'm honestly enjoying the random directions Okamoto sensei is taking this story.

At this point, he's just freestyling and I'm here for the ride.

There's no need to be so serious as some are taking it. After all, this is ultimately hentai with some really decent plot.

I'd even say a stronger plot than the countless run-of-the-mill isekais that litter the manga landscape today.
 

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