Class Ten'i ni Makikomareta Konbini Ten'in no Ossan, Yuusha ni Wa Hitsuyou Nakatta Amarimono Skill o Kushishite Saikyou to Naru You desu - Vol. 1 Ch.…

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While this is an interesting POV of someone who's... being not too ambitious, someone like Mukohda (with less reactionary), but yeah, too much Wall of Text. The drawing is pretty much so-so.

The "leftover" skill itself is still not shown, kinda making me wonder what it is.

But really, a virginity?
 
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I kind of liked his monologuing in which he reflects on different things including trivial stuff like stocking shelves, cramming books and wishing good fortune to each kid. He's kind, simple-minded and quite a doormat, but he's not stupid and has a ton of assorted life experience. The addition of the 100-year-old... uh, shota is freaking wild, though.
I noticed that his niece doesn't appear at all after summoning. Hmm
Isn't that her on the volume cover?
 
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Isn't that her on the volume cover?
That's my assumption, as well, because a kuro gyaru is pretty distinctive, but within the chapter itself, the last time she's shown is on page 16 (out of 56), maybe page 27 at the latest if you assume that the girl we see from behind is her.

Post-transfer, the four main "heroes" are pretty much the only ones shown beyond the faceless mobs, though Bangs-chan shows up a couple times.
 
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Too much explanation of things that should be tropes by now.
But maybe that's their aim, purposely piss people off to give weight to things, like Endless Eight giving people the time loop fatigue. They really didn't need to introduce everyone one by one.

I like the guy attitude so I'd give this a chance.

What do you call the male version of lolihag?Shotacoot?
 
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Hmmm.... this one has every trope and writing hack dialled up to 11 to parody levels....
Curious what direction the author is taking this in...
 
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I agree with some of the sentiment, but I don't find the wall of text particularly annoying. In fact, it felt in-character. Most of the narration is not from a third party narrator but from our protagonist himself. Which means the narration sneaks in a bit of characterization for him, which is the problem with exposition dumps, they are just empty story without character.

The fact he is just as droning and long winded before the isekai as he is during and after it means its on purpose. Man is very slow and analytical.
 

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