Saikyou no Kensei, Bishoujo Maid ni Tensei Shi Houki de Musou Suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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Dang, bullied AND kidnapped? It's like they couldn't choose which trope to go with, I wonder if they'll get out of this situation and then have the young miss walk into a big pit or something.
Wow, she actually did get kidnapped like I thought she might in the last chapter. Guess she needed to get bullied by the adventures long enough for the MC and her family to arrive in the capital—I guess it would be kind of hard for the MC to "protect" Rosarena like the synopsis of the story said they would if she gets herself kidnapped and never seen again in only the first two chapters.

On a side note, I knew the art felt familiar. It's the same artist of My Yandere Girlfriend Lurks in the Dungeon and Kills Me Over and Over Again.
 
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This is kind of trash lol, what's the point of giving the MC a background like that if they're just going to act exactly like every other shut in loser who gets isekai'd? She's supposed to be a middle aged sword saint who spent their whole life fighting.
 
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this author's artstyle kinda look like chatgpt ngl, i mean not really but i always found the faces a little bit weird and out of place even in his previous work, i don't really mean it in a bad way but its kinda interesting
 
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There's some bad grammar in this translation:

"The reason Milady disappeared because my fault."
It would make more sense if she said:
"The reason Milady disappeared is because of me."
or
"I'm the reason Milady disappeared. It's my fault."

"I want to become a sword saint!! Even right now!!"
No one would ever say "even right now." That is awful grammar.
It would make more sense if she said:
"I want to become a sword saint!!" Right now!!"
The word "even" doesn't belong in that sentence.

This sentence is kind of awkwardly phrased:
"And I have generally read through books on martial arts, so..."
A better way to phrase that sentence, would be:
"And I generally read martial arts books, so..."
 
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This is kind of trash lol, what's the point of giving the MC a background like that if they're just going to act exactly like every other shut in loser who gets isekai'd? She's supposed to be a middle aged sword saint who spent their whole life fighting.
well yes, maybe he is used to fighting but not defending/guarding?
sure he should have sensed the ambush or something, but didn't he stated he lost all his might?
 
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Okay, the laughter, mocking, and insults were warranted. The tripping? Absolutely NOT. Brandishing a weapon just for someone giving you a tongue lashing is also not okay.

Ohhh, it's a fight now!

Those kidnappers have chosen to get murdered.
 
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I don't know why but page 34~35 looks so familiar like I've read it a long time ago or might've been a deja vu. If its not that, then I might have read something with the similar poses from other manga and my brain is just messing with me by overlapping that memory. Anyways... Looks like I found another hidden gem this time around, looking forward to it.
 

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