GraPara! - Ch. 133 - A Sultry Night (Censored)

[whorainzone]

Well we assume Arir is a bad writer because she has made us all angry but I have most certainly found a pattern with her here in grapara. As for them looking like they have there lives together that remains to be seen things just NOW have seemed to settle and both are now on a parallel direction difference is Sakura has to decide for herself why to do because shinobu isn't there to help her unless she talks with fuckboi and shinobu has to decide if he will make the decision for fumi or let her do it it seems the director is leaving it up to him and not her.

Airi isnt a bad writer because she made us angry. just read the from chapter 95 again till now and tell me if it seems logical in any way how the story progresses. It doesnt. Assassinating the fmc character after 128 chapter because of a stupid misunderstanding and making her as stupid as a potato just to move the plot forward is plain dumb writing. She needs a reasons for the character act that way. And if slutkura is shown that she can come out of these baits alone and than when it gets real she cant its simply baddly written. And im even more convinced next week when shinobu says yes to the nude part of fumi and slutkura taking the offer.

 

[box2024]

Umm I have thought Arir was a shit writer since KZ. It's not like this is her first stint writing. Also you read that misunderstanding trope and are really saying it's we only think that because we are mad?

It's only a misunderstanding from the readers perspective from sakura's she was cheated on from shinobu's he was aboundond and not good enough for her and yes I have to rethink Arir's writing it's yes convoluted and a little weak but with grapara it's not shit. I will admit emotions over rode sense when I said it.

 

[box2024]

What's the latest chapter that came out? Here on Mangadex, it goes up to chapter 23, but it's not in English

24 part 1 and I'm not sure what radon is doing with it right now. He said he was still translating it.

 

[diphuc1]

It's only a misunderstanding from the readers perspective from sakura's she was cheated on from shinobu's he was aboundond and not good enough for her and yes I have to rethink Arir's writing it's yes convoluted and a little weak but with grapara it's not shit. I will admit emotions over rode sense when I said it.

+1 on this. Manga version of KZ was still pretty bad, but it was always going to be hard to completely salvage it with the og source's setting and even then it managed a twistedly wholesome ending out of that mess.

 

[box2024]

Airi isnt a bad writer because she made us angry. just read the from chapter 95 again till now and tell me if it seems logical in any way how the story progresses. It doesnt. Assassinating the fmc character after 128 chapter because of a stupid misunderstanding and making her as stupid as a potato just to move the plot forward is plain dumb writing. She needs a reasons for the character act that way. And if slutkura is shown that she can come out of these baits alone and than when it gets real she cant its simply baddly written. And im even more convinced next week when shinobu says yes to the nude part of fumi and slutkura taking the offer.

Well it's less an assassination and more a betrayal to the readers on sakura's part and when you look at it that way that was Arir's point she wanted us to experience that kind of betrayal because that's ntr I hate saying that but she succeeded in that. It of course came with hate and I think more than she was expecting. Of course for me this doesn't change the fact that I will not make the same mistake of reading her work again.

 

[900samm]

It's only a misunderstanding from the readers perspective from sakura's she was cheated on from shinobu's he was aboundond and not good enough for her and yes I have to rethink Arir's writing it's yes convoluted and a little weak but with grapara it's not shit. I will admit emotions over rode sense when I said it.

What are you talk about? Like first off perspective? If we are judging writing why would I not use my perspective. And two, that doesn't even dispute that it's a misunderstanding, Sakura thinks something that is clearly not true and events were conveniently and quickly writing to keep her from find out the truth, eventually she will likely find out what happened and realize she misunderstood the situation, so a misunderstanding. Look, everyone's entitled to their opinions but from where I stand this is shit writing

 

[whorainzone]

Well it's less an assassination and more a betrayal to the readers on sakura's part and when you look at it that way that was Arir's point she wanted us to experience that kind of betrayal because that's ntr I hate saying that but she succeeded in that. It of course came with hate and I think more than she was expecting. Of course for me this doesn't change the fact that I will not make the same mistake of reading her work again.

But it wasnt ntr and we had it once in the previews chapters. It was cheating and not ntr. And it was pretty much an assassination, you guys were talking how slutkura were loving shinobu and how they act together, they support each other and always talked when mistakes happened. Even in this 32chapters in this arc there were misunderstandings that got solved by simply talking. But this one, no no just lets run away from him lol. You trying to convince yourself that airi is not that bad but she is in fact a bad writer. We can start from kz go to her trash pornhwa and in the end we ending here.And all of them are trash and grapara is below average. And im just reading it to see how fumi and shinobu will end. The works after... i couldnt careless.

 

[box2024]

What are you talk about? Like first off perspective? If we are judging writing why would I not use my perspective. And two, that doesn't even dispute that it's a misunderstanding, Sakura thinks something that is clearly not true and events were conveniently and quickly writing to keep her from find out the truth, eventually she will likely find out what happened and realize she misunderstood the situation, so a misunderstanding. Look, everyone's entitled to their opinions but from where I stand this is shit writing

Sakura's character has been consistently written to avoid or run away from conflict what happened was in character for her the sex with fuckboi wasn't fully something she wanted or at least at this point I can say that because we haven't yet been shown for sure she is still with fuckboi sexually let alone romantically. Until then the story goes on and anything can happen.

 

[diphuc1]

It's amazing how much a bad writer can get people to yap back and forth in a corner on the internet.

 

[box2024]

But it wasnt ntr and we had it once in the previews chapters. It was cheating and not ntr. And it was pretty much an assassination, you guys were talking how slutkura were loving shinobu and how they act together, they support each other and always talked when mistakes happened. Even in this 32chapters in this arc there were misunderstandings that got solved by simply talking. But this one, no no just lets run away from him lol. You trying to convince yourself that airi is not that bad but she is in fact a bad writer. We can start from kz go to her trash pornhwa and in the end we ending here.And all of them are trash and grapara is below average. And im just reading it to see how fumi and shinobu will end. The works after... i couldnt careless.

Yes but shinobu didn't resolve sakura's fears when it came to fumi we as readers no he wasn't having sex with her but he did have feelings he was guilty about towards her. Plus Arir's writing isn't bad in hindsight but it IS convuluted Sakura being able to outrun shinobu is in fact a convoluted part of the story.

 

[900samm]

Sakura's character has been consistently written to avoid or run away from conflict what happened was in character for her the sex with fuckboi wasn't fully something she wanted or at least at this point I can say that because we haven't yet been shown for sure she is still with fuckboi sexually let alone romantically. Until then the story goes on and anything can happen.

I disagree, and even If i did agree that just makes her a shit character and also you have just pivoted from "Sakura didn't have a misunderstanding" to "Sakura had a misunderstanding, but it's in character"

 

[whorainzone]

Yes but shinobu didn't resolve sakura's fears when it came to fumi we as readers no he wasn't having sex with her but he did have feelings he was guilty about towards her. Plus Arir's writing isn't bad in hindsight but it IS convuluted Sakura being able to outrun shinobu is in fact a convoluted part of the story.

We had it once and its still weird to read that shinobu is partially of fault because he didnt resolve slutkuras fear... did he do anything to be not trusted? in slutkuras perspective of these 100 chapters? getting a knife stab, literally throwing away his life for slutkura be successful? Thats such an odd thing to use as an argument. It was slutkuras insecurities that lead to that not shinobu not resolving things. iirc someone even wrote that he mentioned the time he slept with fumi because he was drunk and even there she was understanding. And now she didnt even questioning what she just saw? And airi is a bad writer lol.

It's amazing how much a bad writer can get people to yap back and forth in a corner on the internet.

There are bad mangaka out there who have managed to bring the entire internet to a standstill. Compared to that, the twenty of us are nothing.

 

[Alsatia]

My point was Arir is using mirrored characters and parallels between shinobu and Sakura with where they are in life now. For instance both of the times we have been shown for certain they are having sex with someone else it's with no duologue. When you compare that to when they had sex it's far different. Sakura and shinobu are different sexually but do in fact compliment one another and give one another something that they didn't get with there current partners sakura being the most obvious in that there was no love there. While with fumi it's much harder to say what's missing I know something is I just can't put my finger on it and it's frustrating me. It may be with shinobu really he didn't seem to give the same love he gave sakura fumi seems to have given all the passion. That might be it.

You know what I think it is. The final panel of the two. Fumi looking down and Shinobu looking at her with a bewildered expression.

Then she kisses him. Yet one detail I noticed is her eyes are closed. His eyes are open. Kissing with eyes open usually means something. I just can't remember what. That stood out to me when I saw it.

 

[diphuc1]

You know what I think it is. The final panel of the two. Fumi looking down and Shinobu looking at her with a bewildered expression.

Then she kisses him. Yet one detail I noticed is her eyes are closed. His eyes are open. Kissing with eyes open usually means something. I just can't remember what. That stood out to me when I saw it.

Emotional detachment, suspension of romance suggesting that not everything is in sync. Something along those lines maybe, could be an over analysis, they seemed to be getting along just fine in the scenes while the script was being written. Not much more to think about til 134.

 

[Alsatia]

Emotional detachment, suspension of romance suggesting that not everything is in sync. Something along those lines maybe, could be an over analysis, they seemed to be getting along just fine in the scenes while the script was being written. Not much more to think about til 134.

Yea true. It could be that he's just shocked at Fumi's actions and is just bewildered. It was just a funny detail to me lol

 

[900samm]

Emotional detachment, suspension of romance suggesting that not everything is in sync. Something along those lines maybe, could be an over analysis, they seemed to be getting along just fine in the scenes while the script was being written. Not much more to think about til 134.

No way you are saying kissing with your eyes open is a sign of emotional detachment, what?

 

[baabaaboo]

sakura will do the sex scene, and fumi will relent to producer pressure because she wants to use that opportunity for shinobu directing career to keep moving forward, it's not necessarily sex scene like sakura's, so both shinobu and fumi will agree for the sake of each other dream.
No need to pick side since both mc and fmc have move on with their own life. Just end it already. She already killed this work in chapter 129. She and the publisher may think they have gain another momentum to run this story. Apart from more repetitive ntr scenes in future chapters, this title had lost it's premise and has nothing more to offer.

 

[VuongOuki]

You know what I think it is. The final panel of the two. Fumi looking down and Shinobu looking at her with a bewildered expression.

Then she kisses him. Yet one detail I noticed is her eyes are closed. His eyes are open. Kissing with eyes open usually means something. I just can't remember what. That stood out to me when I saw it.

You're overthinking it, mate. It's just that Shinobu is satisfied and surprised that Fumi could ride him so intensely like that. Shinobu opened his eyes simply because Fumi suddenly kissed him and he wasn't prepared for it. In the next part, it seems Fumi wanted to keep having sex, so we can hear the groans of 'Ah' and 'Uaah' continuing—looks like their neighbors are going to have a hard time sleeping tonight, haha.

 

[Alsatia]

You're overthinking it, mate. It's just that Shinobu is satisfied and surprised that Fumi could ride him so intensely like that. Shinobu opened his eyes simply because Fumi suddenly kissed him and he wasn't prepared for it. In the next part, it seems Fumi wanted to keep having sex, so we can hear the groans of 'Ah' and 'Uaah' continuing—looks like their neighbors are going to have a hard time sleeping tonight, haha.

😂😂😂

 

[diphuc1]

No way you are saying kissing with your eyes open is a sign of emotional detachment, what?

I was just listing off a bunch of possibilities and not applying it to the ShiFumi going on, RELAX