Thanks for the good work, take care.This is gonna be the last chapter for me so feel free to pick this one up. If nobody picked this up in probably 6 months, then I'll try to get back to it if I have the time.
But whyyyyy!!?This is gonna be the last chapter for me so feel free to pick this one up. If nobody picked this up in probably 6 months, then I'll try to get back to it if I have the time.
I'll check it out once I'm off work, thx mens.@TheCakeIsALieWasTaken
Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".
Normally I would say it's because different authors choose to have races mature differently to differentiate their setting from other authors. But as this is manga, the most likely reason is the same as why there are so many ancient [insert race here] immortal lollies.bruh why they're still in child shape when they're already in 20s?
isn't it usually they stopped aging when they hit 30+ or something?
Did the changes, but not yet uploaded. As for the flowchart, she really did say that.@TheCakeIsALieWasTaken
Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".