Neo man Boindan Mariya - Ch. 33

[MangaDex]

 

[arkhangelzk]

damn these kids ruthless

 

[lito954]

I feel bad for her, she was trying so hard and was about to take the first step. Then the 3 bitches show up and knock her down just when she was about to start walking and then hopefully running to her goals

 

[statflow]

feelsbadman

next time, she should try to ease into it, instead of jumping straight into playing in public, start with just our mmc and fmc as a safe space. then expand it to a couple more people who you can trust (their friends), then slowly ease into it. going straight from 1 person to public and anyone's eyes made it a big hurdle.

can't control the public, especially when people don't know the intimate details of your condition. the three terrible girls from the school were just the shitty cherry on top of the bad situation.

 

[Jesterio_]

man, sucks that she failed her public performance again but pretty on the money on how performance anxiety will take a few tries before she sees any breakthrough.

Reminds me that this is also kind of a issue that the mc in Haimiya-senpai is also facing, but unlike here he’ll probably overcome it in one chapter xd

 

[BOTMAN]

Best girl doing her thing

 

[ChocolateIEthan]

Canto 10 core

 

[pachingching]

Best girl doing her thing

BEAT THEM UP BEST GIRL!

 

[Leyk973]

I like the theme and pacing of the story a lot, the different approach of the "looking at other people issue" for each character a lot, the character themselves, from Chad-Json to Pig-bro, the character art, but damn I find the paneling and writing so basic it keeps me out of enjoying the whole thing properly.

It feels like a first story from a talented young author, with enough potential that the editor gave the ok, but the editor doesn't say much to improve because either themselves are not ver experienced or because it's still above the slop so "just keep the chapters coming, author". It's not slop, but argh with all the good points it could be a 9 or even a 10 letsgo, but for me core points are missing.

I hope when the season ends they get some kind of constructive criticism about that to their ears.

Still I find this interesting because for manhwa I tend to really enjoy them for some outstanding, particular quality or take on a setting (I love Eternally Regressing Knight for its intensity, Villains are destined to die for the MC's "humanity" take), find them overall good across my criterias (GED is peak comedy with everything great around it, Dungeon Odyssey's author adds lovable secondary characters to circumvent the plot armor and add tension, Childhood Friend Complex is a series without easy quid pro quos if you binge the second season), or categorize them as slop very fast, but I find this one in the middle.

Long "rant", curious what y'all think.

 

[retolee]

"whoa, are you busking? lemme hear you play. hey speak up, hey look at me, speak up and make eye contact, and play music and what are you doing hurry up and-" girl sit down and shut up.

 

[Daymare]

So going back through, if she has some form of late developed Prosop, I'm curious as to if they'll explain how she seemed to recognize him, in uniform, from behind, multiple times, or the author is just willing to let the first few chapters be a plot hole because he has the idea later lmao

 

[UncannyLuck]

I like the theme and pacing of the story a lot, the different approach of the "looking at other people issue" for each character a lot, the character themselves, from Chad-Json to Pig-bro, the character art, but damn I find the paneling and writing so basic it keeps me out of enjoying the whole thing properly.

It feels like a first story from a talented young author, with enough potential that the editor gave the ok, but the editor doesn't say much to improve because either themselves are not ver experienced or because it's still above the slop so "just keep the chapters coming, author". It's not slop, but argh with all the good points it could be a 9 or even a 10 letsgo, but for me core points are missing.

I hope when the season ends they get some kind of constructive criticism about that to their ears.

Still I find this interesting because for manhwa I tend to really enjoy them for some outstanding, particular quality or take on a setting (I love Eternally Regressing Knight for its intensity, Villains are destined to die for the MC's "humanity" take), find them overall good across my criterias (GED is peak comedy with everything great around it, Dungeon Odyssey's author adds lovable secondary characters to circumvent the plot armor and add tension, Childhood Friend Complex is a series without easy quid pro quos if you binge the second season), or categorize them as slop very fast, but I find this one in the middle.

Long "rant", curious what y'all think.

Hmmm, yeah I think I agree. The art is nice but the paneling is a bit off so it's definitely worse than those other ones you mention, but this is one of the ones that I look forward to each week because all of the characters are so interesting.

 

[HyperSonic0509]

Between the scratched out faces and the pitch black voids that stare back, maybe seeing girls as rocks isn't so bad

 

[Papa420]

Thanks for translation

 

[Carn109]

Let Yeojin be happy

 

[Tcof]

What is this ? Avenger of "seeing people as..." condition

 

[DiabolusUrsus]

"whoa, are you busking? lemme hear you play. hey speak up, hey look at me, speak up and make eye contact, and play music and what are you doing hurry up and-" girl sit down and shut up.

"I see your logorrhea is out of control again. Don't worry; there are treatments. Administering guitar to the face."

 

[fazzaki]

Feeling cute, might cause some blood bath later😘

 

[diamoond]

Canto 10 core

bro this shit got me cackling thank you bro
i cant believe we got mother in this chapter

 

[legendaryswordsman]

BEAT THEM UP BEST GIRL!

Yeah they need to be taught a lesson