"you have Dang Hongchen's exemple laid before you" typo: exemple -> example
"isn't women or friendship, but money and goods." It isn't women or friendship...
thanks for chapters xD
@Lusario Fellowship works if it's tongue in cheek. It certainly implies that it's a group of people who regularly group up to hit on this chick. A gathering is so less specific, that it defeats the purpose of a label.
It says "camping trip is a sorority", but sorority is a society of women. "Fraternity" is a solution, but I don't know if this grouping of people could be called a society. I'd likely just go with the less specific "something".
"this whole camping trip is just something these people came up...
From a style standpoint, I think you're better served sticking closer to the literal. Between the 2: "when trees in the woods grow tall, the wind blows them away".
I assumed "tallest tree catches the wind" was a rephrasing. I suggested it as an alternative because it's short.
I like the...
The idioms are a little mixed up. The bigger they are the harder they fall means "the more important or powerful a person is, the more difficult it is for them when they lose their power or importance." vs. the tallest tree catches the wind which means something like 'standing out will bring...