How can a person have a better career. Likes drawing. Likes tits. Makes money drawing tits. The problem would be if he DIDN'T like drawing tits, but was forced to. That would be sad. But we know that's not the case! So HOORAY!
You've got the cause and effect reversed.
Women's breasts and ass are not "evolved to appeal to men". Women have big asses because their pelvises are wider and tilted to accommodate birthing children. Also, breasts are obviously for feeding babies. The fact that men find these things...
Fight one: Backstep is used to move you away from "danger", so it seems it can't be used just willy-nilly. Mc taunted her to make her set the whole arena on fire, so when he used backstep he'd still be in danger, so it would auto backstep again, and again, and again, becoming more of a...
Is this REALLY the beginning? I feel like I got dropped right into the middle of a story with NO introduction or explanation of anything.
If it truly is the beginning, and the prerequisite is that you HAVE to read the description to know what happened before the story starts, then that's just...
Creepy. As. Fock.
MC has no redeeming qualities.
Confesses his love for the lady because of her boobs..
Immediately hits on her 12 year old daughter. He's 20.
Translation and/or proofreading is horrible. Also, the story just plops you right in the middle with very little info and character development. Characters are super generic tropes. But the worst offense? TIDDIES ARE CENSORED!
The mystery angle is not well done, and the characters are blasé. The fan service is okay. He feels up the President constantly and she doesn't mind. It would be a revalation if it's revealed that she likes it, as it seems like she likes the vice-prez.