Pretty alright so far. Some spelling mistakes here and there but that is fine.
You sometimes go funky with the proportions of the characters in some spots like sudden giant hands for instance. Which is fine in gags but it happened in some serious moments.
Also, holy freaking foreheads batman.
Skeleton warrior is really starting to get on my nerves. His motivation here was retarded. I guess he just can't understand that he is too weak and really needs more of an upgrade. This was a good first step but it is still not enough and after repeatedly getting stomped into the ground he...
Oh my god i think i just realized what was meant with that flashback where a younger punpun mama and a way younger uncle where shown at the doctor.
They said multiple times how similar punpun is to his uncle....and that scene where punpun papa says " no matter what happens I'll always be your...