this has probably been suggested before, but it would be cool if there was a way to filter searches to only series that have been completed/completely translated, or if there was a way to filter searches so only unfollowed series would show up (because if i'm looking for new a series I don't...
kinda weird that zombie was changed to thrall. while both words are used to describe undead, the original definition of the word "thrall" is "the state of being in someone's power/under someone's control" (think of the word "enthrall/enthralled"), usually implying that they are unable to resist...
Are you sure the mom's name isn't Esther? I've never heard the name Esthel, but Esther is a biblical name.
(Esther is a central figure in the folktale celebrated during Purim, a Jewish festival. Her story is told in the Book of Esther in the Hebrew Bible)
loving your work, though someone should tell the TS they're a bit overzealous with italics and other emphases. it loses its effect when it's used so often, giving it less impact at times when it would otherwise be necessary for the tone of the scene. the spacing itself is pretty good, and the...
@Snipernonscope
no, i mean i thought the gambling part would be less integral. like, sure there'd be a focus on rolls and stuff, but i didn't think the entire plot would be 'man spends day and night getting currency that can only be used to fuel his gambling addiction'