Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei o Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Th…

[MangaDex]

 

[SpringLily]

Still alive, still slow, still swamped, but I'm no longer completely incapacitated. This was actually a relatively quick edit. I should be back to fixing up the old chapters soon.

 

[KuroZer0]

Reminding me that this exists is cruel in its own way

 

[Madologist]

 

[Kanade0021]

welcome back!

 

[maindish]

wait, is there actually something new to this? I figured there's some joke going over my head.

 

[MaxNotHere]

Personally I prefer this version cuz those comically large chests in anime and manga are a pet peeve of mine

 

[ltmauve]

wait, is there actually something new to this? I figured there's some joke going over my head.

It's been edited so that Filia has a smaller chest

 

[Youn0]

Personally I prefer this version cuz those comically large chests in anime and manga are a pet peeve of mine

Same! Big is fine, but too big breaks realism. I get distracted thinking about how much they would be in the way and how much their back must hurt...

Small is fine (unless you look like a child. I'm not into lolis), but the upper end of 'medium' is the sweet spot.

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Dionaea]

Fantastic. She's perfect now. If only you could also reduce the chapters where romance doesn't progress

 

[Pilomotor]

Same! Big is fine, but too big breaks realism. I get distracted thinking about how much they would be in the way and how much their back must hurt...

Small is fine (unless you look like a child. I'm not into lolis), but the upper end of 'medium' is the sweet spot.

More than a handful is a waste.

 

[LadyTyche]

I was hoping the edit would be they banged immediately that night and "End," but this was good too.

 

[maindish]

It's been edited so that Filia has a smaller chest

As someone on team pettanko, I never would have noticed.

 

[SpringLily]

wait, is there actually something new to this? I figured there's some joke going over my head.

I was wondering if I would get anyone. I left some hints in case the edit was too subtle.

• Title - "Editor's Cut"
• Page 5 - Second half of the title
• Page 10 - "Every chest contains treasure"
• Page 36 - Side by side comparison

 

[wannieyah]

Medium is premium!

 

[NARESH4444]

wait, is there actually something new to this? I figured there's some joke going over my head.

Personally I prefer this version cuz those comically large chests in anime and manga are a pet peeve of mine

It's been edited so that Filia has a smaller chest

Same! Big is fine, but too big breaks realism. I get distracted thinking about how much they would be in the way and how much their back must hurt...

Small is fine (unless you look like a child. I'm not into lolis), but the upper end of 'medium' is the sweet spot.

Fantastic. She's perfect now. If only you could also reduce the chapters where romance doesn't progress

More than a handful is a waste.

I was hoping the edit would be they banged immediately that night and "End," but this was good too.

As someone on team pettanko, I never would have noticed.

Big is bountiful.
Small is justice for all.

And...

Medium is premium!

...medium is the absolute premium.

 

[PvtRyan96]

If only we could have an edit achieving the opposite effect to balance things out, too...