Shura Youjo no Eiyuutan ~Hanpa-sha to Iwa Reta Youhei, Youjo ni Tensei Shite Nariagaru~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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The speech bubbles on page 24 appear out of order.

Panel 1's are swapped.

Panel 3 should have "Well... I guess you're right."

Panel 4 should be, from right-to-left, "Anything unusual to report?", "No... though that kid kept muttering weird stuff.", and "Weird?"
 
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I'm sleep deprived asf, might some error and inconsistency happen because my eyes didn't have any rest, so if you find something let me know
Get some sleep, then come back to it. Nothing wrong with that.

That being said, it seems bubbles 2 and 3 on page 16 are switched.
 
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Hey this series seems really cool :thumbsup:

When you have stuff with age revert or gender swap but they retain their personality from before, I rly like that. Usually they become basically another person, which I find kinda makes the whole thing kind of pointless
 
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The characters kinda confuse me.

First the MC pretends to be "a mere peasant girl", then she proceeds to beat up the guy who suspects her of being a spy, outright revealing that she's "much older" than him. Not suspicious at all.

Now she returns to her "just a child" façade ("if [I weren't a child] would you treat me as an equal?") and claims she'll be a hero, and the corporal thinks she's getting ahead of herself? Even though the "child" just easily defeated the "exceptional, undefeated" soldier without even showing her full strength? I mean, I get that the heroes are super strong and no amount of training can make it up. But does he really believe a child can get this strong just by training really hard?
 
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The characters kinda confuse me.

First the MC pretends to be "a mere peasant girl", then she proceeds to beat up the guy who suspects her of being a spy, outright revealing that she's "much older" than him. Not suspicious at all.

Now she returns to her "just a child" façade ("if [I weren't a child] would you treat me as an equal?") and claims she'll be a hero, and the corporal thinks she's getting ahead of herself? Even though the "child" just easily defeated the "exceptional, undefeated" soldier without even showing her full strength? I mean, I get that the heroes are super strong and no amount of training can make it up. But does he really believe a child can get this strong just by training really hard?
On this setting there are people that are literally monsters blessed with insane talent. Doesnt mean those people dont train but seems to be the kind of people that with a few weeks/months of training they can beat easily people with 10 years of training (the MC was renowned international wise with probably the most battle experience of the setting and yet he was one shooted with ease by the female hero)

I agree that the MC should make her mind and choose if she wants to behave like an old grizzled veteran or a child instead of changing character almost on every scene
 
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The characters kinda confuse me.

First the MC pretends to be "a mere peasant girl", then she proceeds to beat up the guy who suspects her of being a spy, outright revealing that she's "much older" than him. Not suspicious at all.

Now she returns to her "just a child" façade ("if [I weren't a child] would you treat me as an equal?") and claims she'll be a hero, and the corporal thinks she's getting ahead of herself? Even though the "child" just easily defeated the "exceptional, undefeated" soldier without even showing her full strength? I mean, I get that the heroes are super strong and no amount of training can make it up. But does he really believe a child can get this strong just by training really hard?
It feels like the author isn't sure about the story they want to tell. The premise has a lot of potential, but so far it's been a mess.
 
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So, how many more chapters til we're caught up and waiting for the raws?
This is great by the way. I'm liking it a lot.
 
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You're really tearing through these chapters, great job!

Sol needs a female role model to teach her how to live properly as a girl.
I hope that Irene hero takes her under her wing, she's the only candidate currently.

So, how many more chapters til we're caught up and waiting for the raws?
Looks like the raw currently has 30 chapters
 
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