Get some sleep, then come back to it. Nothing wrong with that.I'm sleep deprived asf, might some error and inconsistency happen because my eyes didn't have any rest, so if you find something let me know
You are smashing these out, thank you! Get some restI'm sleep deprived asf, might some error and inconsistency happen because my eyes didn't have any rest, so if you find something let me know
On this setting there are people that are literally monsters blessed with insane talent. Doesnt mean those people dont train but seems to be the kind of people that with a few weeks/months of training they can beat easily people with 10 years of training (the MC was renowned international wise with probably the most battle experience of the setting and yet he was one shooted with ease by the female hero)The characters kinda confuse me.
First the MC pretends to be "a mere peasant girl", then she proceeds to beat up the guy who suspects her of being a spy, outright revealing that she's "much older" than him. Not suspicious at all.
Now she returns to her "just a child" façade ("if [I weren't a child] would you treat me as an equal?") and claims she'll be a hero, and the corporal thinks she's getting ahead of herself? Even though the "child" just easily defeated the "exceptional, undefeated" soldier without even showing her full strength? I mean, I get that the heroes are super strong and no amount of training can make it up. But does he really believe a child can get this strong just by training really hard?
One of the heroes is the "most beautiful man"I'm actually surprised that not all of the 6 heroes are hot babes. And even more, 5 of them are man? Ubelievable! Outrageous!
It feels like the author isn't sure about the story they want to tell. The premise has a lot of potential, but so far it's been a mess.The characters kinda confuse me.
First the MC pretends to be "a mere peasant girl", then she proceeds to beat up the guy who suspects her of being a spy, outright revealing that she's "much older" than him. Not suspicious at all.
Now she returns to her "just a child" façade ("if [I weren't a child] would you treat me as an equal?") and claims she'll be a hero, and the corporal thinks she's getting ahead of herself? Even though the "child" just easily defeated the "exceptional, undefeated" soldier without even showing her full strength? I mean, I get that the heroes are super strong and no amount of training can make it up. But does he really believe a child can get this strong just by training really hard?
Looks like the raw currently has 30 chaptersSo, how many more chapters til we're caught up and waiting for the raws?