Hoshokusha Kei Mahou Shoujo - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[KenseiSeraph]

Thanks for the chapter.

Using "devilish woman" should work better than "succubus".
If I recall correctly, that's how it was in the unofficial novel translations.
It might be that I'm just biased due to the unofficial novel translations though.

 

[74HC595]

Using "devilish woman" should work better than "succubus".

Seductress would work too.

 

[Airzpool]

As I read too many manga, a girl that have heart in the eye is very dangerous type of girl. A fanatical or brainwashed person. I hope the MC V card remains safe.

 

[undeed]

I think simply "a seductive girl" will suffice.
Something that works with the "where did you learn that" follow up, but not too complicated for a grade school

 

[Loliphilosophy]

She is.

 

[PurpleTear]

Azure Nova : I shall bear her child

 

[Leyana]

I'd have used "bewitching".

 

[RutraNickers]

So our girl is completely useless physically because all of her Ena is used to feed her Familia? I can see a situation where she gets trapped somewhere where her Familia can not enter and she only survives because of Azure Nova comming in clutch. This will probably be the reason they'll become a team and how the protag will begin interacting more with the other Witches.

 

[JaxunHero]

Bewitching/Seductive/Flirt/Temptress could all be usable

 

[bonusdungeon]

Nice scan. Also they don't put manholes in alleyways lol (since there wouldn't be enough room to climb down into given it's between two building foundations).

 

[Blaze_Rod]

Succubus is kind of a bad translation because it implies a connection to the enemy faction, incubi.

 

[Evil_Moray]

Terraria summoner playthrough ahh powers

 

[Koiish]

Personally i feel succubus works, but as others have said bewitching would also work in terms of landing the joke.

Also on page two Azuma says "Are you flirting on me?" which should probably be either "Are you flirting with me?" or "Are you hitting on me?".

 

[Kanade0021]

Thanks for the translation!

 

[pokytos]

Hear me out, what if there's a moster who only likes boys and doesn't care about girls, I'd lmao if there's a chapter with that kind of thing lol

 

[Andasen]

Why are there so many spiders, there's a bunch of other insect i can tolerate