This still has a lot of the same errors and missing words. ie Doraim was not brought to Hakuren's side, he brought some midwives with him to help deliver the baby and teach the maids how to be midwives themselves.
This still has a lot of the same errors and missing words. ie Doraim was not brought to Hakuren's side, he brought some midwives with him to help deliver the baby and teach the maids how to be midwives themselves.
…isn’t the dark dragon the one who was feuding with Doraim’s dad for centuries? This is getting kind of crazy. Also, new dragons? I want to see their dragon forms. The girls tail looks crazy.