Sengoku Komachi Kuroutan: Noukou Giga - Vol. 17 Ch. 85 - Last Stand

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Big shout out to MTL sniper or else this wouldn't happen.

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You should have upload your work even without a sniper, you know? I mean, working on a chapter but constantly is easier than translating 3 chapters at once, no?
well, I only aware of gold's upload when I upload the chapters. I finished Ch 85 at 20th, I think. though I do forgot to upload ch 83 and 84, thinking I already did. sorry about that.

I'm okay with someone else picking this up. Scanlating is more like a hobby to me. I do it when I was relaxed. the past month is quite hectic with many school activities and administration mandated by the government.
 

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A few nitpicks: (Page numbers are excluding the credits page)

Page 1: "has fallen" should be "have fallen" (there are two subjects, "they have", not "they has")

Page 11: "They finally move," should be "They're finally moving," or "They're finally advancing," for more natural speech

Page 17: "When they did it!?" doesn't fit here. Judging by the surrounding text you might have meant "When did they do it?!" but I'd need to see the original Japanese to properly check the bubble.

Page 18: The current phrasing around the survey is a little rough. I'd write it as "This was the result of the topological surveys." "They allowed prediction of Takeda's battle plans," "refinement of the Oda Army's formations," "and informed the route of Tokugawa's surprise pincer." But there's a lot of directions you could go here.

A pretty good three chapter release, but your time crunch is showing somewhat. The other two chapters were good, no notes there.

Oh, and thank you for the continued good translations. I'm only nitpicking because I like them. :p
 
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well, I only aware of gold's upload when I upload the chapters. I finished Ch 85 at 20th, I think. though I do forgot to upload ch 83 and 84, thinking I already did. sorry about that.

I'm okay with someone else picking this up. Scanlating is more like a hobby to me. I do it when I was relaxed. the past month is quite hectic with many school activities and administration mandated by the government.
I'll gladly always wait for your quality work~ :thumbsup:
 
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A few nitpicks: (Page numbers are excluding the credits page)

Page 1: "has fallen" should be "have fallen" (there are two subjects, "they have", not "they has")

Page 11: "They finally move," should be "They're finally moving," or "They're finally advancing," for more natural speech

Page 17: "When they did it!?" doesn't fit here. Judging by the surrounding text you might have meant "When did they do it?!" but I'd need to see the original Japanese to properly check the bubble.

Page 18: The current phrasing around the survey is a little rough. I'd write it as "This was the result of the topological surveys." "They allowed prediction of Takeda's battle plans," "refinement of the Oda Army's formations," "and informed the route of Tokugawa's surprise pincer." But there's a lot of directions you could go here.

A pretty good three chapter release, but your time crunch is showing somewhat. The other two chapters were good, no notes there.

Oh, and thank you for the continued good translations. I'm only nitpicking because I like them. :p
Thanks for the input. I'll fix it soon
 
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well, I only aware of gold's upload when I upload the chapters. I finished Ch 85 at 20th, I think. though I do forgot to upload ch 83 and 84, thinking I already did. sorry about that.

I'm okay with someone else picking this up. Scanlating is more like a hobby to me. I do it when I was relaxed. the past month is quite hectic with many school activities and administration mandated by the government.
Okay I was gonna have a snarky reply about how it took a sniper to get things done but this grounded address to the hiatus was pretty neat. Although the feverish backlash from some of your fans is pretty comical ngl. (Check out gold scale's work on ch 86 for a hearty chuckle)
 

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