Nice work, thank you picking this up, but there's some crazy mistakes in the text. But the most critical one is
Pg 30: Uzume never got rejected by Shinba, she's the one who actually rejected him earlier and here she's saying "I didn't want to reject him either!"
Some other minor ones
Pg 4: "I'll give Shinba a piece of my mind" she's not really specifically talking about Shinba here
Pg 20: She's slightly more condescending here, in her usual manner.
Pg 30: "Playing a supporting role", kind of hard for the MTL to understand the context, the proper TL for this would be "You're just an outsider..."
@KDT_SCANS if you need a guy for PR/QC-ing this series, please invite me, would love to read the series earlier