Musume ni Danzai Sareru Akuyaku Koushaku ni Tensei Shitemashita - Ch. 3.1 - The Tutorial Begins (Part 1)

[TheEnd478]

luckily in the WN from what i remember...

Spoiler

ice princess hasnt bone him yet, tough many girl want to bone/got headpat from him, at least we have someone with the same age range with mc

.......

Spoiler: RANT

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH JAPAN AND WANTING HEADPATS!!!!!!!

 

[TheEnd478]

Is it still incest if your father's soul has been replaced by a completely different person?

Biologically Yes, Spiritually, MC is likely a past/another life of the father so still TECHNICALLY the same soul! So


YES!!!

 

[Psychronia]

Why is there a rule like that? Are they afraid of something bad happening to the daughters in the big city?

I like to think him doting on his daughter like this is going to win the prince over instead. That would be a twist of irony.

 

[DeadToReal]

Her mom must be disappointed in her grave right now, her beautiful daughter is actually blushing and falling for her own dad Meanwhile, MC is still completely normal. He's just trying to avoid the game's death flags.

thank you for translation

Mother is just mad that she can't have her threesome with her daughter.

 

[AthalosJ]

How cute. Please don't let this become Usagi Drop 2. I don't want any incest or ecchi here, I just want him to become a proper father.

I don't really care either way it's all fiction so as long as the story's good i don't mind it being wholesome or going the incest route, people need to stop taking fiction so seriously like it's real life😮‍💨

 

[BP]

My horny ass could never be a Duke,




all my intelligence operatives would be pregnant.

Is it still incest if your father's soul has been replaced by a completely different person?

 

[thycondrius]

Remember, even if you ISEKAI, don't do it with your daughter!!!!

 

[NilTheRunaway]

Is it still incest if your father's soul has been replaced by a completely different person?

if we're talking about physically (biologically) then probably

(the mindset that which makes Giorno Giovanna related to Jonathan Joestar)

 

[sanctuary]

MC is likely a past/another... (endless yapping fanfiction)

dumb react isn't enough

 

[vanillysb]

How cute. Please don't let this become Usagi Drop 2. I don't want any incest or ecchi here, I just want him to become a proper father.

finally a normal person. these incestoids really ignore his intention of building a parent child relationship and his age gap just to disgustingly wish them together.

 

[vanillysb]

Is it still incest if your father's soul has been replaced by a completely different person?

yes, at least biologically. on the other hand it’s pedophilia either way because she’s fucking 14

 

[TheEnd478]

dumb react isn't enough

First time I seen someone edit a reply. Strange that it was my rare SHORT comments, I'm sure I have a rant on this specific forum somewhere. So it's strange THIS is the reply you're willing to die on! A JOKING Reply to someone else! Also it's only Fanfiction if I was making shit up, which I was not because I wasn't talking about the story and just using other story tropes! So that EDITING of my reply looks pretty fucking stupid!

But yeah, guess I drew the short straw of being targeted by a Troll, but seriously, at least TRY! Guess the lowest hanging fruit was too tempting I suppose!

 

[blulaz]

It's legal in Naropa

 

[sanctuary]

First time I seen someone edit a reply. Strange that it was my rare SHORT comments, I'm sure I have a rant on this specific forum somewhere. So it's strange THIS is the reply you're willing to die on! A JOKING Reply to someone else! Also it's only Fanfiction if I was making shit up, which I was not because I wasn't talking about the story and just using other story tropes! So that EDITING of my reply looks pretty fucking stupid!

But yeah, guess I drew the short straw of being targeted by a Troll, but seriously, at least TRY! Guess the lowest hanging fruit was too tempting I suppose!

I like you.

 

[Carn109]

all the pent up affection is coming out at once

 

[monkey123]

Is it still incest if your father's soul has been replaced by a completely different person?

It's biological incest.

 

[Monovar]

Would've been nice to see their 7 day trip in detail and see their bond develop instead of just skimming over everything. So many of these isekai authors have no concept of the journey being more important than the destination.

 

[sanctuary]

Would've been nice to see their 7 day trip in detail and see their bond develop instead of just skimming over everything. So many of these isekai authors have no concept of the journey being more important than the destination.

I said this many moons ago but I often feel that authors aren't particularly well read besides the things they read in school which is a stark constrast compared to what's found in western fantasy literature. I think many isekaislop writers could benefit from just reading The Hobbit.

 

[mysteana]

I said this many moons ago but I often feel that authors aren't particularly well read besides the things they read in school which is a stark constrast compared to what's found in western fantasy literature. I think many isekaislop writers could benefit from just reading The Hobbit.

If you're pegging things against classical authors like Tolkien, your bar is set way too high. WN authors are literally a minor step up from fanfiction.net authors. You're having a selection bias of cherry picking the creme of the crop and comparing that to barely amateur authors with a totally different publishing/editorial pipeline, if they even have that.

And, FWIW, even "NYT Best Seller" authors can be pretty effing sloppy and I'd argue that some of them have less variety than LN novelists. And that's something.

 

[theShear]

If you're pegging things against classical authors like Tolkien, your bar is set way too high. WN authors are literally a minor step up from fanfiction.net authors. You're having a selection bias of cherry picking the creme of the crop and comparing that to barely amateur authors with a totally different publishing/editorial pipeline, if they even have that.

Pretty much. There is a reason the LN variant often massively rewrites stuff. Not just improvement of the flow but even scrapping whole Plot points. For example I read the Space Mercenary WN and LN. The LN flows MUCH better, fixed weird stuff, toned down and changed questionable bits and moved the MC's brain from his Super Magnum back into his head (Though the guy is still living "the dream"). It shows how much better the author got and how much a Editor can actually help.
Though honestly I still enjoy WN's since it's sometimes "Baby's first Novel" and some have some serious passion when writing those. I can respect that.