Isekai Elf Mura no Omawari-san - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

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Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".
 
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bruh why they're still in child shape when they're already in 20s?
isn't it usually they stopped aging when they hit 30+ or something?
 
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Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".
I'll check it out once I'm off work, thx mens.
 
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bruh why they're still in child shape when they're already in 20s?
isn't it usually they stopped aging when they hit 30+ or something?
Normally I would say it's because different authors choose to have races mature differently to differentiate their setting from other authors. But as this is manga, the most likely reason is the same as why there are so many ancient [insert race here] immortal lollies.
 
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Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".
Did the changes, but not yet uploaded. As for the flowchart, she really did say that.
 

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