Isekai Elf Mura no Omawari-san - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

[MangaDex]

 

[TheCakeIsALieWasTaken]

This is gonna be the last chapter for me so feel free to pick this one up. If nobody picked this up in probably 6 months, then I'll try to get back to it if I have the time.

 

[Mangamoz]

This is gonna be the last chapter for me so feel free to pick this one up. If nobody picked this up in probably 6 months, then I'll try to get back to it if I have the time.

Thanks for the good work, take care.

 

[Flame-2-Haze]

It's back! 🫲😭🫱

 

[Gangan]

Wdym the sacred text got flowchart in it lol

 

[Carn109]

The sacred texts know all

 

[Spazz6768]

Thanks for the translation!

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

@TheCakeIsALieWasTaken
Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".

 

[pir0zhki]

Okay I need to know more about these sacred texts.

 

[havelmom]

PEEPING TOM ELF !
CALL THE COPS...uh...

 

[OWMWO]

THE COIF STAYS ON.
Truly a sister of the cloth.

This is gonna be the last chapter for me so feel free to pick this one up. If nobody picked this up in probably 6 months, then I'll try to get back to it if I have the time.

But whyyyyy!!?
Need more, officer!!

 

[unnamederror]

bruh why they're still in child shape when they're already in 20s?
isn't it usually they stopped aging when they hit 30+ or something?

 

[lswgamer]

God with the life hacks.

 

[TheCakeIsALieWasTaken]

@TheCakeIsALieWasTaken
Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".

I'll check it out once I'm off work, thx mens.

 

[Finnacle]

The prophecy flow chart got me good. God really saw all the possibilities ahead of time.

 

[Miserys_End]

bruh why they're still in child shape when they're already in 20s?
isn't it usually they stopped aging when they hit 30+ or something?

Normally I would say it's because different authors choose to have races mature differently to differentiate their setting from other authors. But as this is manga, the most likely reason is the same as why there are so many ancient [insert race here] immortal lollies.

 

[TheCakeIsALieWasTaken]

@TheCakeIsALieWasTaken
Thanks for working on this. A few things you might consider fixing:
> Page 3
"elves that lives" -> "elves that live", "in the entrance" -> ""at the entrance".
> Page 16
Not exactly sure if that was supposed to be "face" or "nose", but definitely not "flowchart". At least i haven't heard of any expression like that.
> Page 19
If that was the name of the story, then you should probably capitalize it, and maybe enclose it in quotes. Also, "entere" -> "enter".

Did the changes, but not yet uploaded. As for the flowchart, she really did say that.

https://imgur.com/a/uzl8e68

 

[Romisterie]

I suspect the sacred text is a romantasy novel

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

Did the changes, but not yet uploaded. As for the flowchart, she really did say that.

https://imgur.com/a/uzl8e68

Hmm, then I guess it's supposed to be "scenario in the flowchart where...", and not "...hitting himself in the flowchart" as i read it

Spoiler: If you care...

I think you forgot closing double quotes on page 14, and you didn't change it on TL notes page. Also, i missed it somehow, but another thing on page 3 is "some of them leaves" -> "some of them leave".