Ougon no Keikenchi - Ch. 25

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Probably just nitpicking, but some of the TL felt off to me:
Rare comment was more on "that's certainly an interesting story" from Blanc
who replied by being humble and say it's not

Blanc's asked what is Rare's race, not class.
And her second bubble should be "You don't seem to be a starter one"
It's the same meaning, but I think the current TL make her tone a bit...more arrogant? than curious.
 
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Probably just nitpicking, but some of the TL felt off to me:
Rare comment was more on "that's certainly an interesting story" from Blanc
who replied by being humble and say it's not

Blanc's asked what is Rare's race, not class.
And her second bubble should be "You don't seem to be a starter one"
It's the same meaning, but I think the current TL make her tone a bit...more arrogant? than curious.
Think asking about her race makes more sense then class. Especially in the context of going thrue a species evolution.

So since Blanc evolved from skeleton > lesser vampire > (insert adjective here) Vampire, she would think in those terms when asking Rare what kind of monster race she evolved into.
 
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Not even this manga is safe from the sekuhara trope. . .
 
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Thank you for the translation!

The fact that Blanc accomplishes anything, even though she is a bumbling and adorkable fool, is really entertaining. She started over sooo many times in the beginning, and now towns fall before her. In a way she is the real hero of this story. :)
 

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