Hyouketsu Reijou-sama o Follow Shitara, Mechamecha Dekiai Sareteshimatta Ken - Ch. 16

[RWorld]

This is way too hard of a whiplash. Shoulda have divided the explanation into two chapters at least after all that setup.

 

[dOmOlz]

Axe got so close even my balls feared getting chopped off.

 

[CatLife]

The author was like

 

[crotmaniac]

Well baited

 

[habla]

maya x grant!? my shipper couple instincts are lighting up

 

[OWMWO]

NANI THE FUCK??
Nice cleaver girl.

 

[ApolloX1209]

Okay, I did not saw that coming DX

 

[NerimaShinjuku]

Editor: “sorry, your series got the axe. chapter 16 will be the last”

Author: “that sucks. guess we’ll resolve the duel, get father’s approval, show first kiss, and they’ll say ‘i love you’ all in one chapter”

Editor: “Hey great job on chapter 16. btw you’re not getting the axe after all”

Author: “Wtf I got nothin left. school arc?”

 

[Ezlsnow]

Did things changes form the web novel(?)? Can I no longer trust the comments?

I advise readers to not take web novel spoilers as true spoilers for adaptations like these because WNs are purely straight from authors, and adaptations such as light novels and manga go through editors for "polish" and may even make a lot of change to target an entirely different demographic altogether, like removing the explicit scenes in R18 WNs and then we have something like Hitoribocchi no Isekai Kouryaku manga. A mainstream non-R18 example is Tensura WN and LN which are considerably different in story.

It may not apply to all WNs, but treat them generally as prototypes, and LNs or other adaptations as the "polished" version.

 

[Psychronia]

Oh, a cleaver girl. Anyway, what the fuck was that?

I predicted the father being stupidly tsun as well, but this highkey deserves an assbeating.
If either of the couple were sane, this would have been an extremely traumatic experience no matter how it played out.

 

[rocksilver]

My bet is that blondie (silver haired?) is leading them all on and that he's banking on the two to shut up and get married already. ~ Chapter 15

Hey! I was right!

 

[whateverfloatstheboat]

Oh thought it had been axed but new character?

 

[EgregiousTophat]

Whiplash so hard i think my neck snapped. I still maintain that the pacing we're getting is genuinely ass. This manga can't seem to figure out what it wants to be. At least the art is nice.

 

[Friendly-Sentence710]

Looks at last page
this getting out of hand. Now there two four of them.

It's crazy, I thought this whole thing was a play when the noble was first introduced because he seemed cool. But then he acted like an arrogant POS so I got fooled and now here we are.

I knew it had to be an act esp. because Maya was in with it.

 

[lol126]

From an irl standpoint I'm annoyed, but from a story standpoint, this is completely logical since she's pretty high ranking as a noble and he's just a servant

 

[killer_siner666]

whole time reading this chapter i heard the trumpets getting louder

 

[MesaOracle]

It will not be the axe that comes for this series, but poor sales of the light novel. If that should happen it will certainly dig its own grave.

 

[Kaito57]

BRUH... Bro played the role of the villain so well, we got tricked and blinded to this plot twist !!

Page 1 : Alicia really gave us her "NAH, HE'LL WIN" face lol

Oh dear, I feel an Yuri-andere coming...

What an asspull. Like come on author, where are your balls?

I mean... that would actually explain why he didn't just killed Gray when he was at his mercy and or why Maria was even obeying the orders of an outsider of the estate !! It's not perfect but it's something

Plus, I'm just so happy it wasn't axed, so, fuck the details lol

 

[Lorithas]

Did things changes form the web novel(?)? Can I no longer trust the comments?

So, honestly? Probably not. What you read in this chapter is right about what I remember reading in the web novel. The previous commenters may have been getting him (the young lady's cousin or whatever) mixed up with some later villain type character.

 

[BackBrainKick]

I really can't stand lame twists like this. Maybe this should have been axed.