Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu - Ch. 291.5 - Kuroki Erika, Questioned 【Scrapped Draft】

[UhhExi]

Negative situational awareness

 

[radstylix]

Oh, thanks for translating this deleted chapter!

Yeah it's not good for this "arc" for the teacher to also become a horny freak since Erika becoming one does NOT help with the class observation. Also Iike the others said, it's Sou complimenting someone into becoming delulu again.

And there we go, there was no backlash nor drama involved.

As a webcomic artist myself that has a ton of delays, I really really feel his pain about inconsistent updates. It definitely feels shameful to post after a long delay, and it gets harder (and imposter syndrome becomes stronger) the longer it goes on.

I also know the pain of writing, but needing the posts to be consistent, or at least attempt to, one can post their chapter/page without being completely happy with it just to keep the update schedule up.

All of these also saps the fun out of drawing/writing the series...

 

[LordWind]

This might not be "part" of the work in the traditional sense but thank you for taking the time to bring the draft and the author notes to us.

Thanks for the TL!

 

[Xonthelon]

This is the old, scrapped version of chapter 292, right? Seems a bit confusing to label it as 291.5.

But yeah, this was bound to end in a tragedy for Erika-chan, so I am kind of glad it got scrapped.

 

[OWMWO]

Wait, what happened to Sensei about to JUMP HIM on last chapter??
Where is SENSEI ATTACK that I have been waiting for!!

Joke aside, good to see Sensei came to realization how this chapter feels so disconnected with previous chapter.

 

[reu]

that progress report, lmao
author was about to GRRM himself, "the wait was to long so nothing I put out could live up to the hype" type shit

 

[Flame-2-Haze]

I consider this scrapped version the canon to the story.

 

[Psychronia]

No yeah. I respect Kisa-sensei for this. It's often said in writing that if you're stuck on how to write the next sentence, the problem is probably your previous two sentences.

Sou, you're supposed to be defending yourself, not rizzing her up! Is this Ultra Super Affirming Big Brother Instinct at work?
Though I guess it's possible for him to paralyze a woman with some sweet talk alone.

Hinata for the reliable assist from the side is quite nice.

 

[Owyn]

well,
1. it made no sense for MC to praise the one who he had just dumped if that was still the play
2. Sensei was broken way to easily like a dummy with no inner-dialogue
so it's for the better

 

[luigiymario2]

Scrapped? Dammit, it would've been funny if this was actually canon lol

 

[Tanaka_Taro]

No yeah. I respect Kisa-sensei for this. It's often said in writing that if you're stuck on how to write the next sentence, the problem is probably your previous two sentences.

Sou, you're supposed to be defending yourself, not rizzing her up! Is this Ultra Super Affirming Big Brother Instinct at work?
Though I guess it's possible for him to paralyze a woman with some sweet talk alone.

Hinata for the reliable assist from the side is quite nice.

Completely agree.

Assistant Hinata is super sweet (even with the dead eyes on the last page, lol), and pages like these are also needed as balance and contrast for when her dark side knocks on the libido door again. The timing is hilarious too.

I'm fond of the Ultra Super Affirming Big Brother gags in general, and this instance feels wilder than usual because it ended up coupled with the roleplay ("Erika you're my ideal woman!" LOL) and because the situation is genuinely out of control, borderline physically dangerous, this time. Beast-tamer(?)-maxxing.

It's peak 1:39 chapter for me. The only reason I can see to scrap it is what you described, being forced to take a couple of steps back to fix the next one. Or impostor syndrome is starting to consume Kisa-sensei's brain. Let's hope it's the first.

 

[Achaius]

Bro needs an editor so bad .

 

[dankenglish]

Hinata losing the light in her eyes at the end is the little detail that makes me chuckle.

 

[Kmmmyee]

Awww man, that's a shame. I hope that Erika-sensei is still able to fall for Sou in the rewrite at least, she's way too cute in how she looks and acts. DO IT KISA AND MY LIFE IS YOURS

 

[BanzaiYuri]

Hinata knows ball

 

[AIt3r]

I thought she was method acting. Damn

 

[shumuck]

I hope even when this is scrapped it gets a tiny reference in the future, I do see the lack of story wiggle room that could come from this

 

[G33kG0dT4und3r]

I can see why this timeline had to be erased, sou was mere pages from entering the 18+ route.

 

[Valentine115002]

As you can see guys, using his forbidden technique, the "Bulgarian Pizza Tower Rizz Up" ultimate technique the Rizzler Monks taught to Sou in the secret Tibetan Rizzy Mountains. He rizzed up the unsuspecting dormant 'Woman' instincts inside Erica, completely discombobulating her senses, which brought back her delusions about 3d Men to the mortal plane, completely lobotomizing her brain and turning her (probably) into another 'Miku' species. What an outstanding outplay coming from the Rizz Master, the Rizzler Monks approved of—You can't expect nothing less from Satou Sou! 10/10 chapter!

 

[EirikrInnMyrkr]

Oh, nevermind. We're still mind-breaking sensei. I thought she was going to be spared in the rewrite.

Also, dang. Kisa is being really hard on himself. Hope he doesn't push himself too hard and burn out.

Edit: made this comment before I read G33kG0dT4und3r say something about "this timeline had to be erased". Checked it and sure enough, the title labels this as a scrapped chapter. Didn't notice that.