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This is the essentials of a cultivation story with almost nothing else. The art is the standard low quality toonish stuff. Scratches that itch though.

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Meow!!!

"you have Dang Hongchen's exemple laid before you" typo: exemple -> example "isn't women or friendship, but money and goods." It isn't women or friendship... thanks for chapters xD

No one to deliver shit? This world apparently lacks a population. And I'm out.

@Lusario Fellowship works if it's tongue in cheek. It certainly implies that it's a group of people who regularly group up to hit on this chick. A gathering is so less specific, that it defeats the purpose of a label.

It says "camping trip is a sorority", but sorority is a society of women. "Fraternity" is a solution, but I don't know if this grouping of people could be called a society. I'd likely just go with the less specific "something". "this whole camping trip is just something these people came up...

That's reasonable. Choosing readability over fingerprint for this medium makes sense. Anyways, thanks for taking my feedback.

From a style standpoint, I think you're better served sticking closer to the literal. Between the 2: "when trees in the woods grow tall, the wind blows them away". I assumed "tallest tree catches the wind" was a rephrasing. I suggested it as an alternative because it's short. I like the...

The idioms are a little mixed up. The bigger they are the harder they fall means "the more important or powerful a person is, the more difficult it is for them when they lose their power or importance." vs. the tallest tree catches the wind which means something like 'standing out will bring...

@Oeconomist To your second point, I completely agree. I was trying to make tagging do more work than it can handle.

The breaking of the 4th wall is really terrible. Thanks for reminding us of the genre over and over again.

Too bad about fake tags. I see the "plans to add them". Maybe add the tags after the plan is executed?

I'm hela sad they're isolating main girl. Even if it's for her own safety, caged birds are meant to fly.

Thank you for not turning this into a tragedy.

The test is somehow still 2 months away...

I just binged this entire series today, and this cliffhanger is killing me. I need at least 2 more chapters.