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I don’t see Tsukko being a brocon and I hope that isn’t the case. I can deffo see Tsukko liking Hina though. I think Hina probably not used to someone being so forward towards Tsukko since Tsukko like some unattainable flower.

Bro’s sister thirdwheeled so hard she became the first wheel. And also (coming from the extra chapters in the pre-serialization), it seems that Hinako and Tsukiko are just really close and that new girl was being smug (if I had to guess, possibly trying to snatch up the sister), I don’t think...

31 of those reacts were likes too so it makes doubly upsetting.

The end pages remind me of the royal goon’s (I think that’s the group’s name) goon squad’s end pages, used to have a wacky story built up it was far more entertaining than the actual manga. Edit: I look up the group’s name and corrected it.

I can definitely see this introducing a second heroine that serves no other purpose than to inevitably get her heart broken, still seems inoffensive enough for right now. Thank you for the translation.

Based on the faces she’s been making this chap, I wouldn’t be surprised if she would enjoy that.

I believe he’s like 23? Glad he decided to wait.

That’s never a good sign.

Thank you. Perhaps I’ll come back one day to redo this. Still a bit proud that my first time wasn’t complete Garbo.

Thank you for the detailed answer. Maybe I’ll try your earlier advice of trying out a one-shot and looking for feedback. Crazy how much you were glean from it while I was none the wiser.

Well thank you for the criticism all the same. Hopefully someone with a hell of a lot more skill than me could pick this up and I could go back to being a reader. What are some points about it that really bothered you if you don’t mind me asking? Would like to know.

Didn’t know about that till you mentioned it. Thank you for the suggestion.

Ngl, a little unsure if your first line is a joke or a genuine question but thank you for reading! If it was a serious question, I would have to go back over the translation to provide further clarification. Also, MSPaint Gang

I would say more than anything, her boasting of her sexual experience and her narcissist attitude towards him sours her case. Like the gall she has to continually reference her past experiences and expect our homie to just be like “oh yeah ok, sure let’s date to marry” is stupid. I think maybe...

Honestly because it was labeled as a “pure fluffy romcom” and now we have to see Rinka get her heartbroken and know that she never stood a chance almost every chapter and for me at least it really ruins the wholesomeness this manga was supposed to be. If anyone who got spoilers for LN know...

I would like to know why the author thought it was a smart idea to prolong Rinka’s suffering like this. It’s starting to bring down the “wholesomeness” of this manga imo cuz we all know she’s not winning so why even have this facade continue?

RIP