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On page 26, is that out-of-bubble line on purpose? Shouldn't it be at least stroked if so?

My mind jumped straight to dragon murder when that steak arrived

Please level the pages a bit, or at least change them to grayscale. Currently the blacks are brown, and it looks pretty ugly.

Page 11 "ktill franco"

"Several of Balud's objectives were (...)" Missing s, page 17

@arkvin she's probably the character from the LN that hasn't appeared in the WN yet (according to what kuma translations said on the credits page)

Random Lorem Ipsum on page 20

Some basic levelling would do so much for this...

The katakana on page 6 (アンダードッグ) actually means "underdog", not "and dog". Besides the obvious reading difference, you can see the exact katakana used at the japanese wikipedia page for かませ犬 https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%81%8B%E3%81%BE%E3%81%9B%E7%8A%AC

Repeated line on page 6: "not that I really care though, I'm fine!"

Really similar to Shen Yin Wang Zuo, I wonder if this kid is the , it'd work in the author's multiverse but would make for a pretty shitty ending

On page 10, it's actually the passive form of "separate", instead of the potential form. They're written the same way in Japanese, but you can tell them apart by context.

I wish they removed these fan color pages, they just ruin the thing for me

Oh god, the guy just went and colored the "chapter 1" thing as if it was some lightning perk or something ... It's just the back of the page bleeding through the thin paper ...

On page 13 shouldn't it be "whim" instead of "whine"?

@Grinning_idiot it's probably a mistranslation, the is probably 1 month in the future, not in the past. edit: reading next chapter, yeah, pretty sure it's wrong here

@PuniTranslations On page 12 and the title, why translate 令嬢 as daughter? It makes no sense when it's used, context-wise. It also doesn't make sense as a translation, given that there's no reference to her father, and the speaker also isn't her father. The other meaning "young woman", "young...

It flip flops between Angelina and Angelica through the manga. There are lots of grammar mistakes too. Did this have no proofreader?

Now that I notice, in the new raws the chapter has a title: 三者鼎立. Jisho gives something like "three parties opposing each other", probably refering to the three girls (but could also be some plot stuff I don't remember right now). edit: there's a title now

Pages 11 and 14 have words hyphenated but in the same line, while on page 13 there's "startin g" which was cut by the line break