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Page 10 has some weird lines. "Eat up everyone" even though nobody will be eating for a while? (because it'll take time to prepare the food) "Putting some sesame seeds onto the noodles" but those aren't noodles?

"Must have taken"

On page 6, it's "the three of you" instead of "the three of us"

@Granitefish lol I was saying Earthworm Lady is being childish

Earthworm lady brought her dad to the tea party, really? Who's 8 years old again?

@MagicalCarcrash it's his nightmare. On another note, am I the only one bothered by them eating brains? Like, prions and mad cow disease? edit: @Renard we get a pretty good look at pages 18 and 25

The typesetter for this chapter had a light pink instead of white for their secondary color

@ubre On page 13 there's some untranslated text, reading ダーウィンもびっくり, which on the context would be "even Darwin would be surprised" (by his appearance's change)

Cheeks, not checks

It seems to me like the translation is a bit off ... she's probably talking about them instead of to them. Could happen because of how the sentence probably is in Japanese. Going from the context, I'm pretty sure that it'sas I said, unless the Japanese actually uses あなた or something

Wow, on page 3, 3rd panel, there's a really convoluted (and wrong) line by Momo. Also, on page 5, Ogura Sion sounds wrong, isn't it supposed to be Shion? I can't be bothered to check previous chapters or the raw right now.

Page 12 should probably be checked again, the translation could use some rewording

On page 17, what's up with the boy's name? Is he supposed to be chinese? Was the reading of his name given like that?

I checked the raws, it's not Shikigami (式神), it's Bushin (武神)

Page 28, "how is it" instead of "who" Page 22, the text on the bottom right bubble should be switched with her speech bubble, as he's asking and she's answering

@theoldsparrow yeah, I imagined it was the case

The Spanish kinda bothers me

p 28, "if you can't then leave her"

Everybody talking about the cooking, and I just wanna know why the **** there's a random pink sfx in page 17. Unless it's pink in the raws (which I doubt it is), making it pink is just jarring and ugly. Also, on page 23, there shouldn't be a comma after "it's natural"

@izumabakumatsu it's a different girl