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    Monmusugo! ~Honnyaku Skill de Saikyou Monmusume to Isekai Seikatsu~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 10.3

    I would prefer much rather than having those 2 pixels, having "enemy" spelled right. Yes, I'm an ass. Fight me.
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 3 Ch. 20

    May I second that? @asphyxiav2 , if you ever feel like switching gears, you can work on that one, it's pretty good(even if no cute baby faces).
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 3 Ch. 20

    Hello! It's time for correction💢 of mistakes. 7:"literature class would be |more/much more/most| difficult..."(dunno if he is |stating a fact/comparing it with studying it in his first language/comparing it with all other classes in this school|) "I have fewer advantages...than I thought" either...
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    Motto mo Kirawareteiru Saikyou no Akuyaku ni Tensei - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

    Set place is logical. Close? You can be in the middle of the danger zone, making "closeness" a demerit.
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    Motto mo Kirawareteiru Saikyou no Akuyaku ni Tensei - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

    Well, the point of the spell is to gtho of danger, and if it's danger on two legs, you better get as far away as possible
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    Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen shite Yatta - Vol. 3 Ch. 27.2

    The earth itself has opened its jaws cause it can't keep straight face at the bullshit that is happening there
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 18

    On another note, what a fucking siscon. I feel like he needs that leave, otherwise it will be he, who will doom Dia. Or the world. Or both.
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 18

    @asphyxiav2 now, the usual: 5: "sama" got broken up 9: "uniform (has) just arrived" "Most eldest sons... would attend it, but..." no need to repeat "school", unless it specifically means that they would "attend ANY school" and not "THE school" mentioned before 10: unless father specifically...
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 18

    Ok, gotta read. Then expect the usual;)
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 18

    You uploaded this twice Dude
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tenseishimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 14

    And the third time...isnt needed. Otsukare. (but please do check my comments on two previous chapters, thank you)
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tenseishimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 13

    And another one: P. 8 "we are just running though" No need to over complicate. P. 13 "a dress" P. 21 "if it's Diana, you..." since he talks to her P. 32 "ripples went unnoticed" Ye
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tensei Shimashita - Vol. 3 Ch. 12

    Sorry for the late input(cracked the phone, took two days to get a new one) Anyway, here are my suggestions: P. 8 "computations"? I assume it's meant to be "calculations", as in math? P. 12 "civic district"? "Commoner district" sounds more natural. P. 21 "became a disgraced"-> " Was...
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    Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tenseishimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

    Since I didn't find anything to say about this chapter(good job), do you mind looking at the comment I left in prev chap discussion?
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