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Tbf, he worked it out within the same scene. There are far denser ml out there

That... would be more original, than having the heroine coming and pining/falling for him, provoking Dia's brocon jealousy, which is what I am expecting. You... You're good

Here's Johnny Suggestion time! :meguu: P. 13 "want to resign?" I assume it's more of a "want to refuse?" (choosing an event for the prince; the one time thing) kind of angle, but not sure P. 14 "When I go to the castle/ I started riding in the carriage with my father every day,.." Sounds...

That ship was cut shortly, sadly

W y not a country out of a harem?

You know, I find it kinda ironic that you had to label him as gay...while talking about social (sexual) filters. Plus as he said it himself, to him, keisuke is keisuke.

Then, for when you get back to it: P. 20 didn't translate in the first panel P 29 need to either connect "overwhelmed" and "overwhelming", or separate properly, not just last letter For now, rest, you reckless birb

Do so. This chapter I don't have anything to say, so... Otsukare.

Useless just makes more sense when about people. At least in my book. If it was about a job/title, that brings no merit, then it would be pointless (to have it be) It might be a preference thing, but I believe my choice is better

Ah Point still stands, adults can't be pointless(lol), but can be useless

Correction/suggestion time:huh: P. 6: Do you want to start (study/learning) swords play seriously? P. 7 ...Looking forward to train(ing)... P. 10 (Probably a nitpick, but) I haven't asked your name. (kinda sounds like "who tf asked?" To me, it's weird when phrased this way) -> You haven't told...

Thx. Now it's clear who and what, and makes sence to boot. O

P.32: "There is something, that makes me them(girls) want to be mean" p.37: the whole last conversation is confusing. Cain says that prince won't be able to beat him, and that MC was trying to make an impression(what impression? Unclear), yet Chamberlain boy either asks question about thing he...

Now, imagine if she comes back another time because she got preggers from their sex during reunion? I would both love and hate that.

I would recommend to find a proofreader, there is a bunch of mistakes of a "who speaks to/about whom" type, and just in general could be useful. Otherwise, "otsukare".

"Hyperglycemia" "«Hyper» - meaning «high»" "«Glyco» - referring to glucose and meaning «sugar»" "«Emia» - meaning «presence in blood»" "«High sugar presence in blood»" If anyone here gets this reference to that one yt channel, my respect :salute:

As @Gilthwixt said above, it's about the term itself: she can't be the "unreliable narrattor", since she isn't the "narrator". 🍅 is. She is just a liar, probably.

Navi, ain't it?

Maybe Im wrong, but saying Kubaru is an unreliable narrator here is wrong, because we don't see this backstory from her pov, from 🍅's

It's not about the point of the scenes, but the way they are depicted. No open shots of unaltered(regular censorship doesn't count) dick/pussy/coitus - not porno. Some manga goes around that by showing dicks as something else: banana, miniML and what not, but that's still ero, not porno.