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Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Nosebleed p21 somebody who's lived their entire lives -> somebody who's lived their entire life

IIRC Summer's heart was replaced with a monster core, so I imagine she dies only when that's destroyed. After all, Duskin can fully respawn from the core in his head/chibi body, as well.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec p9 you've done did it now -> you've done it now p9 No matter how strong is Kanade-chan -> No matter how strong Kanade-chan is p10 The enemy is breaking up. -> The enemy is splitting up. p10 no idea who are you talking about -> no idea...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p14 you just haven't seen it yet -> you just haven't seen them yet p17 I don't need your twists -> I don't need your plot twists p17 Those presumptions -> [looks like there's an excess space in-between]

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p1 doesn't have to die, The Hero Albus -> doesn't have to die, the hero Albus p1 rewound the world with magic, Starting -> rewound the world with magic, starting p1 and one girl— Repeated -> and one girl— repeated

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p5 what might happen if -> what might've happened if p5 maybe they would -> maybe he would

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p6 We'll infiltrate, grab what we came for without fighting and leave -> We'll infiltrate, grab what we came for without fighting, and leave p6 There's around 20 bandits -> There are around 20 bandits p6 can work out -> will work out

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p3 despite their look -> despite their looks // despite their appearance // contrary to their appearance p3 capturing prey alive means, they want to butcher their prey -> capturing prey alive means they want to butcher it

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p8 Creativity you say...? -> Creativity, you say...? p18 you should've said sooner -> you should've said so sooner

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p2 I can no longer show it to them. -> I can no longer show it to her. p11 I will become stronger... -> I would become stronger... p15 to learn about being weak -> to learn what it means to be weak p15 I'll try to pursue -> I tried to...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p3 We'll make it in time next!! -> We'll make it in time next loop!! // We'll make it in time next try!! p4 I searched you -> I searched for you p15 except me... -> except mine...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p1 on the 37th loop -> in the 37th loop p1 Albus already knows the warrior, but this is their first encounter. -> Albus already knows the warrior, but this is their first encounter in this loop. p4 A warrior who charged -> A warrior who...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p7 easy bos -> easy boss p9 join a hero's party -> join the hero's party p9 It's always people like you... who ends up dying first -> It's always people like you... who end up dying first p18 I always knew... you'll be fine. -> I always...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p5 Didn't something black just leave just now...? -> Didn't something black disappear just now...? [or "dissipate" or similar] p9 blessed by the curse -> ["blessed" by a "curse" is untypical phrasing, more common would be "affected" by...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p18 Your vital points are the same as humans. -> Your vital points are the same as a human's.

Reiterating my comment from c18: If Zealark remembers everything from each loop until the moment of his death, just like Albus, then he's genuinely dangerous for Albus in a way nothing else is. After all, if your memories regress, it doesn't particularly matter if you're the one casting the...

If Zealark remembers everything from each loop until the moment of his death, just like Albus, then he's genuinely dangerous for Albus in a way nothing else is. After all, if your memories regress, it doesn't particularly matter if you're the one casting the regression spell or not. Keeping his...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @LazyDust Didn't you said -> Didn't you say

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p7 estimated to be at -> estimated at p7 The one's -> The ones p9 attention seeker -> attention-seeker p10 put into danger -> put in danger p10 number one dad -> [There seem to be two spaces between "one" and "dad"] p12 What kind...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Syapaaye p28 misison -> mission