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Ameri truly has the strongest motivation of all to reach the peak of the netherworld: being too embarrassed to confess. We might see her become the next demon king (or queen) before Iruma catches up purely because there's nowhere else for her to escape to.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Waffleidle p7 My criteria for you passing or failing was based on -> My criteria for you passing or failing were based on // My criterion for you passing or failing was based on p9 worthy of rank vav [6] -> worthy of rank vav [6]. p10 the only...

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestion: @LazyDust M-mother Mary!? -> M-Mary's mother!?

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestion: @LazyDust Mary have no choice -> Mary has no choice

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestion: @LazyDust How am I supposed to handle this! -> How am I supposed to handle this?!

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p6 Attacks will -> Normal attacks will p6 start having effect -> start having an effect p7 neglect on developing -> neglect to develop p9 Hereeeeee -> Heeeeere p10 Alicia's heroine image -> Alicia's image as a heroine p12 No need to worry...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Waffleidle p5 make a headache -> cause a headache p7 ... do you remember having warm milk together? -> ... do you remember us having warm milk together?

I like that his one-liners at the end of the boss fights are so short and to the point. That fits well both with his personality and with his status as a speedrunner who doesn't want to waste any time.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Feeed p1 Just share more normally. -> Just explain more normally. p2 around 10 minutes alone for him alone -> around 10 minutes for him alone p2 a strong elite four we would recommend to fight third -> a strong member of the Elite Four whom we...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec p2 until Goethe's killing and the result of the trial becomes clear -> become clear p2 a cover up -> a cover-up // a coverup p3 The Night Blades has -> have p4 Grehan <-> p31 Greham p4 plebians -> plebeians p6 as their life leave -> as...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p33 any addition to the member of the harem -> any additions to the harem -> any addition to the members of the harem p34 gathering for Yuuki protection brigade -> gathering for the Yuuki protection brigade p34 Heck is that? -> The heck is...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Teasday p1 ah've took -> ah've taken // ah took p13 forreal -> for real

More to the point, aren't all dragons left?

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestion: @LazyDust "No way... supernatural phenomenon!?"-> "No way... a supernatural phenomenon!?"

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @AncientMage p19 a vermin wouldn't hardly have -> a vermin would hardly have p38 knocked it off balance... Now... I've got a clean swing at his whole body -> [it/he inconsistency; IIRC on previous pages the monster was called "it"] p42 They're...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @AncientMage p1 resign-ation -> resig-nation p2 I can't accommodate for this -> I can't accommodate this p4 for everyone--a prosperous -> [the "--" should probably be an em dash: —] p9 & p11 & p13 special force unit -> special forces unit...

Edit suggestion: p11: Thou would doeth well -> Thou wouldst do well

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Cegarth p5 spirtis -> spirits p7 beacause -> because p11 like a zobie -> like a zombie p11 death marrch -> death march p15 destraction -> distraction

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Feeed p1 If only there's 40 hours -> If only there were 40 hours p2 Downloadable Contents -> Downloadable Content p4 fight with you -> fight for you p4 manage enough funds -> acquire enough funds p4 to earn money then -> to earn money, then p4...

In terms of narrative, an advantage of a setup where both souls were originally one is that the protagonist can gain a narratively satisfying powerup from this realisation. Whereas if two friendly souls are in a body, it makes less sense for there to be a powerup if one of the souls must be...