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Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p13 my body you know -> my body, you know p14 if the wound's closed I probably -> if the wound's closed, I probably p17 first with switching bodies then -> first with switching bodies, then p17 like this then -> like this, then p19...

Agree, she's definitely the president of Korokoro Cleaners. Though since this president has supposedly been away "for three years" (c20p26), that bodes poorly for our cast's chances of returning to their own bodies any time soon.

Then this somehow becomes common knowledge, and the story switches genre. Like to a body snatcher horror story or something. In fact that could've already happened if Marie's body had sustained a life-threatening injury.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones p16 complementing -> complimenting p20 poison him then we're done -> poison him, then we're done p22 Welcome little miss -> Welcome, little miss p23 ev-erything -> eve-rything p24 Well like what? -> Well, like what? p24 We need to...

M sure is a tough critic.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Stan-Miller p4 bloodt hirsty -> blood-thirsty p4 monster " -> monster" (the " is on a newline] p6 when it's disguised -> when they're disguised p14 A kid with gun -> A kid with a gun

Hopefully Spica doesn't follow this line of thought to its logical conclusion, namely that the actual misbuttonings in this story are all the non-murderers...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @K9mutt all instances of 'Hitoe's' in the chapter should be "Hitoe's": p1, p2, p31 p25 collectors honour -> collector's honour p28 It used to come and curl up -> [Since Shiro was just identified as a male cat, maybe "He used to" makes more...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @WingZeroHeeroYuy p4 end-of-ter minus -> end-of-terminus // end-of-ter-minus p13 brings on an evil -> brings on an evil cycle // triggers an evil cycle p13 instin-cts -> in-stincts p14 okey -> okay

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @EmileTheDevil p2 yens -> yen Punctuation: Throughout the chapter, most question marks are preceded by an excess space. And most speech bubbles that don't end on "!" or "?" lack a period at the end. p2 Should have bought -> Should have bought...

No, it's likely Duskin who's related to Sumire's (alien?) childhood friend, given that he IIRC had memories of her childhood.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @WingZeroHeeroYuy p5 lame as hell if don't -> lame as hell if we don't p5 exam rankings -> exam rankings. p10 [In panel 2, Clara's first speech bubble has a different font from the remaining bubbles.] p10 did good -> did well [unless that's...

I think there's indeed a slight issue between the last panel of page 1 (where Ikezawa refers to interpreting the author) and the first panel of page 2 (where Eguchi responds as if Ikezawa had talked about anything but interpreting the author). But by writing your feedback in such a rude way, you...

The more important part is that it does not matter what the author meant, even if they're alive. A work of fiction stands on its own. Its meaning doesn't suddenly change even if its author goes insane and proclaims that all its characters are aliens or robots, for example. I'll grant exceptions...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Nosebleed The title: "Abandoned: The Hero Who's So Strong He Breaks Every Weapon and The Elf Blacksmith" -> Without an Oxford comma (i.e. ", and The Elf Blacksmith"), it sounds like the hero breaks the poor elf blacksmith, too. Though I guess...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @CommissarAlex p12 last panel: 2x identical speech bubble p30 what's there for me? -> what's in there for me? p31 Protect the heroines." -> "Protect the heroines." // Protect the heroines.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @DrtLckd p2 until a just short while ago -> until a short while ago // until just a short while ago p6 low grade monster -> low-grade monster p6 sounds like a rare species -> [slime is a common species, the line is meant to imply that she's an...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26 p1 someone like you could could -> someone like you could p1 the depth of my heart -> the depths of my heart p4 offer my service -> offer my services p4 demon's king army general -> demon king's army general // general of the demon...

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This article from 2011 by a president of the Tokyo High Court (so presumably a judge or something) suggests that this is not legal, since Japanese parents have a legal responsibility to care for their children until they've reached the age of majority. Now, things that aren't legal can of...