Death Preparation Hero - Ch. 5 - I Don’t Mind an Unworthy Disciple

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @DrtLckd
  • p2 until a just short while ago -> until a short while ago // until just a short while ago
  • p6 low grade monster -> low-grade monster
  • p6 sounds like a rare species -> [slime is a common species, the line is meant to imply that she's an outstanding individual of that species]
  • p7 Just "how much" -> Just how much [or some other means of emphasis]
  • p7 as as an adventurer -> as an adventurer
  • p13 to do it directly by myself -> to do it directly myself
  • p16 Maybe in the past, but now -> Maybe not in the past, but now
  • p18 no one will -> no-one will
  • p32 self-center-ed -> self-cen-tered
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @DrtLckd
  • p2 until a just short while ago -> until a short while ago // until just a short while ago
  • p6 low grade monster -> low-grade monster
  • p6 sounds like a rare species -> [slime is a common species, the line is meant to imply that she's an outstanding individual of that species]
  • p7 Just "how much" -> Just how much [or some other means of emphasis]
  • p7 as as an adventurer -> as an adventurer
  • p13 to do it directly by myself -> to do it directly myself
  • p16 Maybe in the past, but now -> Maybe not in the past, but now
  • p18 no one will -> no-one will
  • p32 self-center-ed -> self-cen-tered
Thanks for pointing these out, did the necessary changes.
 

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