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@BB-62 page 6: "his a 'punishment'" should be "his 'punishment'"

He did. She's the "soothing" one.

@BB-62 page 8, top left speech bubble: "did" should not be combined with a past-tense verb in the same sentence.

@BB-62 Alright, I find it ironic that the issue I pointed out to you earlier is happening here in inverted form. I suggest going with "S-class Natsuki-chan" and "EX-class Yuri-chan-sama" on page 6.

@BB-62 page 4: Starting to notice a pattern of ignoring the glosses that emphasize the self-delusions.

@BB-62 page 3: OK, not gonna sugarcoat it; the second block of text shouldn't have been separated into two sentences like that. The Ecchi no Doujinshi Scans version is far more accurate as a translation, and it doesn't make sense to call her "the bodyguard for the male students" anyway, as she's...

Thanks, though I do note that you did this with later chapters too, so... Good luck, and you have my sympathies.

@BB-62 Uh, why skip all of the glosses for Kaede's ability, like the name being read as "Synchronic Memory"? Speaking of which, the Japanese name (侵食する記憶) translates to "Encroaching Memory" (which fits her self-delusion that she's inherited memories from other worldlines) or "Eroding Memory"...

@BB-62 page 2: you misspelled "Satou" as "Sato", and she's clearly not holding either of the batons.

@BB-62 page 7: "talks" should be "talk"

@BB-62: Isn't the usual format for school class designations "Class [insert letter/number combination]" rather than "[insert letter/number combination]-class"?

@BB-62: I respect your effort into making the translated dialogue flow more naturally... but why go with "Onii-san/Sou's view of me" instead of "Imaginary Onii-san/Sou"? The latter is what the original line actually translates to, and it being the girls' respective imaginary versions of him is...

@salamilamilid: Hey, thanks for taking up the translations; I missed them all until I saw the last one you released earlier today. That said, you have a typo in this one on page 8; you wrote "What to heck" instead of "What the heck" in the penultimate panel.

Am I the only one wondering what the story behind her and the dragon is? Like, how did they first meet and eventually become friends?

@lemon-dono Uh, boss? Page 1, last speech bubble. Also, shouldn't "her" on page 2 be "his" instead?

@LazyDust: The translation in this chapter is quite confusing, compared to the previous chapters.

What's the point in making a localization-heavy translation when a source-faithful one is already up?

@Sullieman page 3, panel 2: "lighting" should be "lightning"

I'm surprised that the father didn't take offense to his older son dissenting over how Kimiya should live his life. @RyuukuSensei page 3, panel 3: shouldn't it be "panties" instead of "pants"?

Maybe the earlier pages are actually remakes, and the originals were deleted, hence the incongruous order?