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So I get wanting to have your character have a traumatic story that causes them to struggle in the here and now, but holy hell, you gotta clue us in earlier about what’s going on otherwise you end up here. We, the audience, don’t know why he’s like this. The other characters in the audience...

Perfectly normal.

Pros: You know what. Cons: MC is unironically a piece of shit. Sexualizing a 12 year old. Y’all can miss me with this shit.

“Bitch I made this”

Kei is a fuckin smooth operator, mark my words that boy is gonna catch someone fine one day

This entire story is a friggin fever dream. It’s a cool premise, mixing up the whole “regressing with constellations” genre with music; it’s actually super interesting. At least, the premise is. This execution of it is… I dunno, man. It feels rushed and unplanned, like the author is just kind...

Someone explain to me how this dude is living his second life and somehow neither he nor Dumbledork have the presence of mind to make sure the other guy is actually down before relaxing? Cmon, man, I’m supposed to believe that homeboy was a mage of the highest order, battle-hardened through fire...

What the fuck is happening here? Poor TL aside (it’s LuaScans, what do you expect), the only thing we really know about the character of the MC is that she’s lazy. 5 chapters and that’s all we’ve really understood. No real compelling reason, either. No “I tried hard and didn’t win so now I’m...

Woah woah woah, pump the brakes. Aren’t we missing like 40-50 chapters of romantic tension driven by nothing but cheap misunderstandings and blatant lying? No? Damn, I thought that’s how these kinds of stories go…. I’m actually super stoked to see two adults come to terms with their feelings...

Huh. Well, that’s certainly one way to end things. Kinda feels like ass that they’re keeping MC in the dark about Aster’s memory though; that’s an unresolved plot point line that it feels like they just kind of lampshaded, especially since the last couple chapters barely even included the MC...

MC is starting to realize that he’s just another child

I’ll level with you. Of all the things I expected, that was not one of them. I did not read the tags. 10/10

Ah yes, manhwas and a clumsily contrived misunderstanding to create tension in the plot. Name a more iconic duo. Seriously though, this kind of cheap plot device to drive the story forward is just…. Ugh. It’s lazy. It’s unimaginative. It’s stale as hell. We’ve all read 1000 stories that used...

Hell ye. Always refreshing to see characters retake control of their lives and stop being haunted by the past. Kind of makes you ache when you think of the version of her that chose to marry the king, despite frankly hating the man. Partly sad because she had to suffer even more because of...

Nunya fuckin business, that’s what

Damn. Thats a rough moment when he realizes “I really want you to stay with us, but I have to acknowledge that it’s not the right place for you”. It’s honestly portrayed beautifully in this chapter, with him almost running through the entire 5 stages of grief.

Kinda refreshing to see an MC be less-than-righteous, and even more so, be that way willingly, even after it being clearly shown that he knows what he’s doing is wrong. Too many MCs in mangas are either paragons of goodness and light, or the edgy anti-hero willing to do anything to accomplish...

writing like this just boils my shit, man. Why use a flashback? Why not just tell the story normally and keep the beginning, middle, and end in order? Flashbacks are to provide key information that led to the current situation; it’s something that answers the question of “how did we get here”...

What the hell is this!? Clear communication? Two characters talking out their feelings like friggin adults? No cheap misunderstandings to drive the romantic subplots? In this economy!? More of this, please. People who deal with emotions like adults are a huge turn on.

Yknow, they could have avoided all of this if the butler didn’t just shout at them then stand there awkwardly while a misunderstanding happened, and instead actually told them wtf is going on a couple chapters back. Seems a bit lazy on the writing side.