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Kinda lazy writing tbh. I know it’s supposed to be a ‘gotcha’ moment when she’s talking to the countess, but the info dump kinda cratered all of that. Author didn’t set anything up or gradually dispense info, so they had to dump it all at once for this scene to make any sense, and that nuked any...

So she marched in, didn’t say anything she was supposed to despite having the opportunity, then got locked up again? Am I understanding that right? The idea itself isn’t bad, but the execution here is… clumsy. A lot of people used a lot of words to say nothing of substance, and it feels like...

Ngl I forgot what this manga was about, my mind was fuckin boggled when they both died lol

It was honestly kinda rough there for the last few chapters, but it feels like we’re getting back on track.

Oh. Wow. Who could have seen this coming. Man I stg I wish we could have one of these stories that doesn’t involve other dudes trying to get the FL. It just weird how every single one I’ve read is like that. Like, why is the answer to “what obstacles must the FL overcome to be happy” somehow...

Lil bro’s ego couldn’t handle not being the main character, so he took the route of delayed MC-induced ego death. That’s a wild play, lets see if it pays off.

I hate it when I get story whiplash because the author put a flash-forward at the start of a story. Cmon man, how hard is it to put the beginning at the beginning?

I know a lot of people don’t vibe with the whole existential cosmic entity challenging humanity thing, but I dig this shit.

Huh. That was….. certainly something. Dude smuggled the pork and beans just to awaken his magic, that’s wild.

Pacing is absolutely glacial

Mecha combat!? In my high fantasy manga!? aight, bet.

lmao bro just invented non-Newtonian mana

“square the fuck up, nerd” but it took 24 pages to say it.

Bruh nothings really happened in like two volumes

TL was top notch. Chapter was still buns tho, I don’t care about her enough for an entire chapter’s worth of backstory.

“At some point they disconnected the orbital elevator” my brother in Christ, you can’t just unplug that sumbich like a usb cable

Aight, that was cute. I don’t think these types of stories have to be anything new or groundbreaking to be an adorable little love story. We’ve seen all these tropes before in the past, but I think it’s charming all the same.

Super friggin vanilla. I like vanilla.

writing is kinda ass, ngl. Glasses dude is just a stand-in with next to no backstory and paper-thin motivations, he’s just set dressing to let MC have her moment. Same with the blond girl. They’re both just vehicles for tropes, there’s no depth to them. If that’s what they were going to be...

TL: excellent, thank you for the awesome work. Story: brother what the fuck was that. After the creative twists of the last two chapters, this was the most generic, boring trope delivery I’ve had the misfortune of reading. like cmon. There weren’t any twists or compelling scenes, it was just a...