Way too convenient. At least come up with a proper explanation or sequence of events, not this cheap-ass bullshit deus ex machina. If you need one, build it properly.
@PortalSage Sadly the story is not really that great, and the main character frequently breaks, uh... character. His psychology is not consistent.
It's not a horrible manga, but it certainly isn't great. Not quite a waste of time, but barely.
Aaaand I'm dropping this. What the fuck did the author think making the strong MC a spineless coward who wouldn't even defend herself like that all of a sudden?!
I don't think "demi-human" is the right term here. I get the feeling that you're trying to see "less than human" rather than "pseudo-human." If that is the case, you can use sub-human, or if the character is the prejudicial sort, "Untermensch," which is the same term in Nazi speak and generally...
@Fwaifuxsenpai
The way you explain it, it seems to me as follows:
Capacity: Max mana, size of the tank.
Potential: Faucet, how fast she can use up the magic/mana from the tank. Bandwidth, or flow rate, or ampere, etc..
Which means that if her potential is too high, it would seem to me that her...
I think you've messed up your potential and capacity there.
The nurse or doctor explains that Nicole has too much magic, but your explanation seems to say that she has too little when you say that her capacity can't catch up to her potential.
Cheers. This is my first trip proofreading for a manga. Please leave your feedback, people!
Edit: Alright, I've seen multiple issues, most of which were born from my inexperience with how dry lines transform into speech in manga, how it affects them. Now that I've seen the actual result and how...